Changeset da7032a for chapter02

Timestamp:

08/23/2012 03:30:44 PM (12 years ago)

Author:

Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@…>

Branches:

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Children:

0a50cc2

Parents:

d9c836b

Message:

Minor grammar/style changes

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@9957 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• chapter02/creatingpartition.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter02/creatingpartition.xml

@@ -35 +35 @@
   However, if the LFS system is intended to be the primary Linux system,
   additional software will probably be installed which will require additional
-  space. A 10GB partition is a reasonable size to provide for growth.  The LFS
+  space. A 10 GB partition is a reasonable size to provide for growth.  The LFS
   system itself will not take up this much room.  A large portion of this
   requirement is to provide sufficient free temporary storage. Compiling
@@ -137 +137 @@
       BLFS where multiple installations of large packages like Gnome or KDE can
       be installed without embedding the files in the /usr hierarchy.  If
-      used, five to ten gigabytes is generally adequate.</para>
+      used, 5 to 10 gigabytes is generally adequate.</para>
       </listitem>