Changeset dcab38f for chapter09

Timestamp:

07/09/2005 03:15:24 PM (19 years ago)

Author:

Matthew Burgess <matthew@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

0ba4e25

Parents:

786aeb2

Message:

Minor rewording

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@6462 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• chapter09/whatnow.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter09/whatnow.xml

@@ -20 +20 @@
 
 <para>Bugs and security notices are reported regularly for all software.
-As an LFS system has been compiled from source, it is up to you to keep
-abreast of such reports.  There are several online resources that track
-such reports, some of which are shown below:</para>
+Since an LFS system is compiled from source, it is up to you to keep abreast of
+such reports.  There are several online resources that track such reports, some
+of which are shown below:</para>
 
 <itemizedlist>
@@ -30 +30 @@
 </listitem>
 
-<listitem><para>CERT (Computer Emergency Response Team)</para>
+<listitem><para><ulink url="http://www.cert.org/">CERT</ulink> (Computer
+Emergency Response Team)</para>
 
-<para>CERT is a mailing list that publishes security alerts concerning various
+<para>CERT has a mailing list that publishes security alerts concerning various
 operating systems and applications.  Subscription information is available at
 <ulink url="http://www.us-cert.gov/cas/signup.html"/>.</para>