Changeset dfb8516

Timestamp:

12/31/2022 04:23:56 PM (16 months ago)

Author:

David Bryant <david@…>

Branches:

11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, bdubbs/gcc13, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

1e6c82b, d8ec0ed

Parents:

06df566

Message:

Minor tweaks: a couple of commas, "your time zone".

File:

• chapter09/usage.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter09/usage.xml

@@ -250 +250 @@
       to trigger at retry time.  To find the subsystem of a device, use
       <command>udevadm info --attribute-walk &lt;device&gt;</command> where
-      &lt;device&gt; is an absolute path in /dev or /sys such as /dev/sr0 or
+      &lt;device&gt; is an absolute path in /dev or /sys, such as /dev/sr0, or
       /sys/class/rtc.</para>
 
@@ -284 +284 @@
     set to local time. If the output from <command>hwclock</command> is not local
     time, chances are it is set to UTC time. Verify this by adding or subtracting
-    the proper number of hours for the time zone to the time shown by
+    the proper number of hours for your time zone to the time shown by
     <command>hwclock</command>. For example, if you are currently in the MST
     time zone, which is also known as GMT -0700, add seven hours to the local