Changeset ea7ec72 for chapter07/stripping.xml

Timestamp:

06/11/2020 06:27:01 PM (4 years ago)

Author:

Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@…>

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Children:

6a156bab

Parents:

3b1b9de

Message:

Typos.
Tweaks to stripping.xml

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/cross2@11923 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter07/stripping.xml (modified) (7 diffs)

chapter07/stripping.xml

@@ -20 +20 @@
     The following steps are performed from outside the chroot
     environment. That means, you have to leave the chroot environment
-    first before continuing. The reason for that is to
+    first before continuing. The reason for that is to:
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          make sure that objects are not in use while they gets 
-          manipulated.
+          make sure that objects are not in use while they are 
+          manipulated.
         </para>
       </listitem>
@@ -45 +45 @@
   </para>
 
-<screen role="nodump"><userinput>exit
-umount $LFS/dev{/pts,}
-umount $LFS/{sys,proc,run}</userinput></screen>
-
   <note>
     <para>All of the following instructions are executed by
@@ -64 +60 @@
   </note>
 
+<screen role="nodump"><userinput>exit
+umount $LFS/dev{/pts,}
+umount $LFS/{sys,proc,run}</userinput></screen>
+
   <sect2>
     <title>Stripping</title>
 
-    <para>If the LFS partition is rather small, it is beneficial to
-    learn that unnecessary items can be removed. The executables and
-    libraries built so far contain about 94 MB of unneeded debugging
+    <para>If the LFS partition is rather small, it is good to
+    know that unnecessary items can be removed. The executables and
+    libraries built so far contain a little over 90 MB of unneeded debugging
     symbols.</para>
 
@@ -88 +88 @@
     built all over again.</para>
 
-    <para>To save more space (about 37 MB), remove the documentation:</para>
+    <para>To save more space (slightly more than 35 MB), remove the documentation:</para>
 
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>rm -rf $LFS/usr/share/{info,man,doc}</userinput></screen>
@@ -100 +100 @@
 
     <para>At this point, you should have at least 5 GB of free space on the
-    chroot partition that can be used to build and install Glibc and Gcc in
+    chroot partition that can be used to build and install Glibc and GCC in
     the next phase. If you can build and install Glibc, you can build and install
     the rest too. You can check the free disk space with the command 
-    <command>df -h $LFS/</command>.</para>
+    <command>df -h $LFS</command>.</para>
 
   </sect2>
@@ -130 +130 @@
       Create the backup archive by running the following command:
     </para>
-<screen role="nodump"><userinput>cd $LFS &amp;&amp;
-tar -cJpf $HOME/temp-tools.tar.xz .
+
+<screen role="nodump" revision="sysv"><userinput>cd $LFS &amp;&amp;
+tar -cJpf $HOME/lfs-temp-tools-&version;.tar.xz .
 </userinput></screen>
+
+<screen role="nodump" revision="systemd"><userinput>cd $LFS &amp;&amp;
+tar -cJpf $HOME/lfs-temp-tools-&versiond;.tar.xz .
+</userinput></screen>
+
     <para>
       Replace <envar>$HOME</envar> by a directory of your choice if you
-      do not want to have the backup stored in <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>'s
-      home directory.
+      do not want to have the backup stored in <systemitem 
+      class="username">root</systemitem>'s home directory.
     </para>
 
@@ -144 +150 @@
       Since the sources are located under 
       <filename class="directory">$LFS</filename>, they are included in the
-      backup archive as well, so you need not to download them again. After
+      backup archive as well, so they do not need to be downloaded again. After
       checking that <filename class="directory">$LFS</filename> is set properly,
       restore the backup by executing the following commands:
     </para>
 
-<screen role="nodump"><userinput>cd $LFS &amp;&amp;
+<screen role="nodump" revision="sysv"><userinput>cd $LFS &amp;&amp;
 rm -rf ./* &amp;&amp;
-tar -xpf $HOME/temp-tools.tar.xz
+tar -xpf $HOME/lfs-temp-tools-&version;.tar.xz
+</userinput></screen>
+
+<screen role="nodump" revision="systemd"><userinput>cd $LFS &amp;&amp;
+rm -rf ./* &amp;&amp;
+tar -xpf $HOME/lfs-temp-tools-&versiond;.tar.xz
 </userinput></screen>