Changeset edbeeb5 for chapter06

Timestamp:

11/03/2015 03:48:42 AM (9 years ago)

Author:

Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 12.2, 12.2-rc1, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/loongarch-12.2, xry111/mips64el, xry111/multilib, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

c81b68d

Parents:

7bbd1bd

Message:

Spelling and other typos -- from Craig Garner

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@10969 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Location:

chapter06

Files:

• adjusting.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• bc.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• dbus.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• gcc.xml (modified) (3 diffs)
• glibc.xml (modified) (4 diffs)
• shadow.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• util-linux.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter06/adjusting.xml

@@ -56 +56 @@
   the prefix of our dynamic linker.</para>
 
-  <para os="d">Now make sure that we're setup to use the correct startfiles:</para>
+  <para os="d">Now make sure that we're setup to use the correct start files:</para>
 
 <screen os="e"><userinput>grep -o '/usr/lib.*/crt[1in].*succeeded' dummy.log</userinput></screen>

chapter06/bc.xml

@@ -74 +74 @@
     <para>To test bc, run the commands below. There is quite a bit of output,
     so you may want to redirect it to a file. There are a very small percentage
-    of tests (10 of 12,144) that will indicate a roundoff error at the last
+    of tests (10 of 12,144) that will indicate a round off error at the last
     digit.</para>
 

chapter06/dbus.xml

@@ -72 +72 @@
 <screen><userinput remap="make">make</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>This package does come with a testsuite, but it requires several
+    <para>This package does come with a test suite, but it requires several
     packages that are not included in LFS. Instructions for running the
-    testsuite can be found in the BLFS book at
+    test suite can be found in the BLFS book at
     <ulink url="&blfs-root;/view/&short-version;/general/dbus.html"/>.</para>
 

chapter06/gcc.xml

@@ -376 +376 @@
           <para>A wrapper around <command>ar</command> that adds a
           plugin to the command line. This program is only used
-          to add "link time optization" and is not useful with the
+          to add "link time optimization" and is not useful with the
           default build options</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-gcc gcc-ar">
@@ -389 +389 @@
           <para>A wrapper around <command>nm</command> that adds a
           plugin to the command line. This program is only used
-          to add "link time optization" and is not useful with the
+          to add "link time optimization"" and is not useful with the
           default build options</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-gcc gcc-nm">
@@ -402 +402 @@
           <para>A wrapper around <command>ranlib</command> that adds a
           plugin to the command line. This program is only used
-          to add "link time optization" and is not useful with the
+          to add "link time optimization"" and is not useful with the
           default build options</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-gcc gcc-ranlib">

chapter06/glibc.xml

@@ -269 +269 @@
     <title>Adding time zone data</title>
 
-    <para>Install and set up the timezone data with the following:</para>
+    <para>Install and set up the time zone data with the following:</para>
 <screen><userinput>tar -xf ../tzdata&tzdata-version;.tar.gz
 
@@ -292 +292 @@
         <term><parameter>zic -L /dev/null ...</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>This creates posix timezones, without any leap seconds.  It is
+          <para>This creates posix time zones, without any leap seconds.  It is
           conventional to put these in both
           <filename class="directory">zoneinfo</filename> and
           <filename class="directory">zoneinfo/posix</filename>. It is
-          necessary to put the POSIX timezones in
+          necessary to put the POSIX time zones in
           <filename class="directory">zoneinfo</filename>, otherwise various
           test-suites will report errors. On an embedded system, where space is
-          tight and you do not intend to ever update the timezones, you could save
+          tight and you do not intend to ever update the time zones, you could save
           1.9MB by not using the <filename class="directory">posix</filename>
           directory, but some applications or test-suites might produce some
@@ -308 +308 @@
         <term><parameter>zic -L leapseconds ...</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>This creates right timezones, including leap seconds. On an
+          <para>This creates right time zones, including leap seconds. On an
           embedded system, where space is tight and you do not intend to
-          ever update the timezones, or care about the correct time, you could
+          ever update the time zones, or care about the correct time, you could
           save 1.9MB by omitting the <filename class="directory">right</filename>
           directory.</para>
@@ -334 +334 @@
     output the name of the time zone (e.g.,
     <emphasis>America/Edmonton</emphasis>). There are also some other possible
-    timezones listed in <filename
+    time zones listed in <filename
     class='directory'>/usr/share/zoneinfo</filename> such as
     <emphasis>Canada/Eastern</emphasis> or <emphasis>EST5EDT</emphasis> that

chapter06/shadow.xml

@@ -148 +148 @@
     group ID (GID) numbers will begin with 1000. This means if you don't pass
     parameters to <command>useradd</command>, each user will be a member of a
-    unique group on the system. If this behaviour is undesirable, you'll need
+    unique group on the system. If this behavior is undesirable, you'll need
     to pass the <parameter>-g</parameter> parameter to
     <command>useradd</command>. The default parameters are stored in the

chapter06/util-linux.xml

@@ -346 +346 @@
         <term><command>fdisk</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Manipulates the paritition table of the given device</para>
+          <para>Manipulates the partition table of the given device</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-util-linux fdisk">
             <primary sortas="b-fdisk">fdisk</primary>