Changeset f47f9cd

Timestamp:

01/09/2003 12:39:48 AM (21 years ago)

Author:

Timothy Bauscher <timothy@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.1.1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, v4_1, v5_0, v5_1, v5_1_1, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

19d5f9a

Parents:

7359e67

Message:

Grammatic changes to Add User and Set Environment sections.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2293 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Files:

• chapter01/changelog.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter05/adding-user.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter05/setting-environment.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter01/changelog.xml

@@ -76 +76 @@
 all times.</para></listitem>
 
-<listitem><para>January 5th, 2003 [timothy]: Chapter 05 - Applied Alex's
-patch to split the <emphasis>Install all software as an unprivileged
-user</emphasis> page into two pages: <emphasis>Adding the user lfs</emphasis>
-and <emphasis>Setting up the environment</emphasis>.</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>January 5th, 2003 [timothy]: Chapter 05 - Applied a revised
+version of Alex's patch to split the <emphasis>Install all software as an
+unprivileged user</emphasis> page into two pages: <emphasis>Adding the user
+lfs</emphasis> and <emphasis>Setting up the
+environment</emphasis>.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>January 2nd, 2003 [gerard]: Chapter 05 - All packages whose

chapter05/adding-user.xml

@@ -13 +13 @@
 passwd lfs</userinput></screen></para>
 
-<para>In order to grant the user <emphasis>lfs</emphasis> the proper permissions
-to the <filename>$LFS/static</filename> directory, issue the following
-command:</para>
+<para>In order to grant ownership of the <filename>$LFS/static</filename>
+directory to the user <emphasis>lfs</emphasis>, issue the command:</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>chown -R lfs $LFS/static</userinput></screen></para>

chapter05/setting-environment.xml

@@ -22 +22 @@
 your LFS installation.</para>
 
-<para>The LFS, LC_ALL, and CC environment variables are also set. The LFS
-variable has been explained in previous chapters. LC_ALL is a variable used
-for internationalization.</para>
+<para>The LFS variable has been explained in previous chapters. LC_ALL is
+a variable used for internationalization.</para>
 
 <para>The LC_ALL variable controls the localization of certain programs,
 making their messages follow the conventions of a specified country. If your
 host system uses a version of <emphasis>glibc</emphasis> older than 2.2.4,
-having LC_ALL set to something other than "C" or "POSIX" during Chapter 5
+having LC_ALL set to something other than "C" or "POSIX" during this chapter
 may cause trouble if you exit the chroot environment and wish to return later.
 By setting LC_ALL to "POSIX" ("C" is an alias for "POSIX") we ensure that