Changeset f8a5e31d for appendixa

Timestamp:

01/18/2003 11:23:45 PM (22 years ago)

Author:

Timothy Bauscher <timothy@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 12.2, 12.2-rc1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.1.1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, v4_1, v5_0, v5_1, v5_1_1, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/loongarch-12.2, xry111/mips64el, xry111/multilib, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

da849d1

Parents:

8dc214d

Message:

Grammatic changes to chapter 5.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2389 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Location:

appendixa

Files:

• bash-desc.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• bash-shortdesc.xml (modified) (1 diff)

appendixa/bash-desc.xml

@@ -10 +10 @@
 <para>bash is the Bourne-Again SHell, which is a widely used command
 interpreter on Unix systems. The bash program reads from standard
-input, the keyboard. A user types something and the program will evaluate
+input (the keyboard). A user types something and the program will evaluate
 what he has typed and do something with it, like running a
 program.</para></sect4>

appendixa/bash-shortdesc.xml

@@ -5 +5 @@
 <para>bash is the Bourne-Again SHell, which is a widely used command
 interpreter on Unix systems. The bash program reads from standard
-input, the keyboard. A user types something and the program will evaluate
+input (the keyboard). A user types something and the program will evaluate
 what he has typed and do something with it, like running a
 program.</para>