Changeset fdb65bd

Timestamp:

06/19/2006 05:55:30 PM (17 years ago)

Author:

Matthew Burgess <matthew@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/parallelism, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008

Children:

bb009c9

Parents:

8bc46a5

Message:

Fix a few typos in chapter 1

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@7647 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Location:

chapter01

Files:

• how.xml (modified) (3 diffs)
• whatsnew.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter01/how.xml

@@ -19 +19 @@
   tools.</para>
 
-  <para>As an alternative to installing an entire separate distribution
+  <para>As an alternative to installing a separate distribution
   onto your machine, you may wish to use the Linux From Scratch LiveCD.
   The CD works well as a host system, providing all the tools you need
@@ -34 +34 @@
   patches need to be downloaded to build an LFS system and how to store
   them on the new file system. <xref linkend="chapter-final-preps"/>
-  discusses the setup for an appropriate working environment. Please read
+  discusses the setup of an appropriate working environment. Please read
   <xref linkend="chapter-final-preps"/> carefully as it explains several
   important issues the reader should be aware of before beginning to
@@ -48 +48 @@
   <para><xref linkend="chapter-temporary-tools"/> also shows the user how to
   build a first pass of the toolchain, including Binutils and GCC (first pass
-  basically means these two core packages will be re-installed a second time).
+  basically means these two core packages will be reinstalled).
   The next step is to build Glibc, the C library. Glibc will be compiled by
   the toolchain programs built in the first pass. Then, a second pass of the

chapter01/whatsnew.xml

@@ -9 +9 @@
   <?dbhtml filename="whatsnew.html"?>
 
-  <title>What's new since the last release.</title>
+  <title>What's new since the last release</title>
 
   <para>Below is a list of package updates made since the previous