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1566	Section 7.11 nitpicks	randy@…	Matthew Burgess	"Multiple stuff here:

1. Noted in the opening sentence:

""If a network card is to be configured, decide on the IP-address""

I find it unusual to hyphenate IP-address. Even so much that in the
very next paragraph it is not hypenated. Either way, it probably should
be consistent.

2. Noted in the 2nd paragraph:

""Unless the computer is to be visible to the Internet
(e.g., there is a registered domain and a valid block of
assigned IP addresses—most users do not have this),""

e.g. and i.e. are typically not interchangeable.
e.g. (Latin meaning, exempli gratia - actual meaning, for example)
i.e. (Latin meaning, id est - actual meaning, that is)

In the text above, i.e. should be used as the explanation is not
an example, it is the actual meaning (translation) of ""visible to
the Internet""

3. In the valid range of addresses table, since a *range* is being
specified, shouldn't the last octet of the address be the maximum 
allowed in the range (and the third octet of the Class B)?"	defect	closed	lowest		Book	TESTING	trivial	fixed