Changeset bc2136e for chapter06/pwdgroup.xml

Timestamp:

06/16/2005 04:47:40 PM (19 years ago)

Author:

Archaic <archaic@…>

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Children:

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9c80e02

Message:

Several minor grammatical fixes. Thanks to Randy and Steve.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@6011 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter06/pwdgroup.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter06/pwdgroup.xml

@@ -16 +16 @@
 
 <para>In order for user <emphasis>root</emphasis> to be able to login
-and for the name <quote>root</quote> to be recognized, there need to
-be relevant entries in the <filename>/etc/passwd</filename> and
+and for the name <quote>root</quote> to be recognized, there must be relevant
+entries in the <filename>/etc/passwd</filename> and
 <filename>/etc/group</filename> files.</para>
 
@@ -70 +70 @@
 <screen><userinput>exec /tools/bin/bash --login +h</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Note the use of the <parameter>+h</parameter> directive. This
-tells <command>bash</command> not to use its internal path hashing.
-Without this directive, <command>bash</command> would remember the
-paths to binaries it has executed. In order to use the newly compiled
-binaries as soon as they are installed, turn off this function for the
-duration of this chapter.</para>
+<para>Note the use of the <parameter>+h</parameter> directive. This tells
+<command>bash</command> not to use its internal path hashing. Without this
+directive, <command>bash</command> would remember the paths to binaries it has
+executed. In ensure the use of the newly compiled binaries as soon as they are
+installed, the <parameter>+h</parameter> directive will be used for the duration
+of this chapter.</para>
 
 <para>The <command>login</command>, <command>agetty</command>, and