Changeset 1def00f for x/dm/dm.xml

Timestamp:

08/01/2015 11:47:07 PM (9 years ago)

Author:

Fernando de Oliveira <fernando@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 12.2, 7.10, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gimp3, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/for-12.3, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/spidermonkey128, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

fc580439

Parents:

7b88d5a

Message:

• Several fixes for the files in the Chapter "Display Managers"; patch sent by Bruce Dubbs. Thanks! Fix 3 for #6639.
• Added instruction to install the sddm bootscript. Fix 2 for #6639.

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@16313 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

File:

• x/dm/dm.xml (modified) (4 diffs)

x/dm/dm.xml

@@ -23 +23 @@
     <para>
       Display Managers are graphical programs used for starting the graphical
-      display (currently, the X server) and loging in a Windows Manager or
-      Desktop Environment.
+      display (currently, the X server) and providing a login capability for
+      a Window Manager or Desktop Environment.
     </para>
 
     <para>
       There are many Display Managers available. Some of the more well
-      known include
+      known include:
       <application>GDM</application>,
-      <application>KDM</application>,
+      <application>KDM</application> (deprecated),
       <application>LightDM</application>,
       <application>LXDM</application>,
@@ -39 +39 @@
 
     <para>
-      Between the Desktop Environments available for Linux you find
+      Among the Desktop Environments available for Linux you find:
       <application>Enlightenment</application>,
       <application>GNOME</application>,
@@ -49 +49 @@
 
     <para>
-      Choosing a Display Manager or Display Environment is highly subjective.
+      Choosing a Display Manager or Desktop Environment is highly subjective.
       The choice depends on the look and feel of the packages, the resources
-      (RAM, disk space) required, and the utilities included.
+      (memory and disk space) required, and the utilities included.
     </para>
 
@@ -57 +57 @@
       In this chapter, the installation instructions of some Display Managers
       are presented. Later in the book, you will find other ones, which are
-      provided as part of some Desktop Envireonments.
+      provided as part of some Desktop Environments.
     </para>