Changeset 339fbfb9


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Timestamp:
07/31/2005 10:00:36 PM (19 years ago)
Author:
Randy McMurchy <randy@…>
Branches:
10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 6.1, 6.2, 6.2.0, 6.2.0-rc1, 6.2.0-rc2, 6.3, 6.3-rc1, 6.3-rc2, 6.3-rc3, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal
Children:
e8d4427c
Parents:
5e82411c
Message:

Fixed typos and minor wording changes to various Chapter 18 package instructions

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@4863 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

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basicnet/netprogs
Files:
5 edited

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  • basicnet/netprogs/cvs.xml

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    8383
    8484    <para>By default <application>CVS</application>
    85     is statically linked against the zlib library included in its source
    86     tree. This makes it exposed to possible security vulnerabilities in that
    87     library. If you want to modify CVS to use the newest system shared zlib
    88     library apply the following patch:</para>
     85    is statically linked against the <application>Zlib</application> library
     86    included in its source tree. This makes it exposed to possible security
     87    vulnerabilities in that library. If you want to modify
     88    <application>CVS</application> to use the newest system shared
     89    <application>Zlib</application> library, apply the following patch:</para>
    8990
    9091<screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../cvs-&cvs-version;-zlib-1.patch</userinput></screen>
    9192
    92     <para>Install <application>cvs</application> by running
     93    <para>Install <application>CVS</application> by running
    9394    the following commands:</para>
    9495
    … …  
    134135      <para><filename>~/.cvsrc</filename> is the main
    135136      <application>CVS</application> configuration file.
    136       This file is used by users to specify defaults for different <command>cvs
    137       </command> commands, for example to make all <command>cvs diff</command>
    138       commands run with <userinput>-u</userinput>, a user would add <userinput>
    139       diff -u</userinput> to their <filename>.cvsrc</filename> file.</para>
     137      This file is used by users to specify defaults for different
     138      <command>cvs</command> commands. For example, to make all
     139      <command>cvs diff</command> commands run with <option>-u</option>, a user
     140      would add <option>diff -u</option> to their <filename>.cvsrc</filename>
     141      file.</para>
    140142
    141143      <para><filename>~/.cvswrappers</filename> specifies wrappers to be used in

  • basicnet/netprogs/inetutils.xml

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    9191make</userinput></screen>
    9292
     93    <para>This package does not come with a test suite.</para>
     94
    9395    <para>Now, as the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:</para>
    9496
    … …  
    103105    <para><parameter>--disable-logger</parameter>: This switch prevents
    104106    <application>Inetutils</application> installing a <command>logger</command>
    105     program, which is installed in the LFS Book.</para>
     107    program, which is installed in the LFS book.</para>
    106108
    107109    <para><parameter>--disable-syslogd</parameter>: This switch prevents
    108     <application>Inetutils</application> installing a System Log Daemon, which is
    109     installed in the LFS Book.</para>
     110    <application>Inetutils</application> installing a system log daemon, which is
     111    installed in the LFS book.</para>
    110112
    111113    <para><option>--with-wrap</option>: This switch makes
    … …  
    264266
    265267</sect1>
    266 

  • basicnet/netprogs/ncftp.xml

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    175175        <term><command>ncftp</command></term>
    176176        <listitem>
    177           <para>a browser program for File Transfer Protocol.</para>
     177          <para>is a browser program for File Transfer Protocol.</para>
    178178          <indexterm zone="ncftp ncftp-prog">
    179179            <primary sortas="b-ncftp">ncftp</primary>
    … …  
    185185        <term><command>ncftpbatch</command></term>
    186186        <listitem>
    187           <para>individual batch FTP job processor.</para>
     187          <para>is an individual batch FTP job processor.</para>
    188188          <indexterm zone="ncftp ncftpbatch">
    189189            <primary sortas="b-ncftpbatch">ncftpbatch</primary>
    … …  
    195195        <term><command>ncftpbookmarks</command></term>
    196196        <listitem>
    197           <para><application>NcFTP</application> Bookmark Editor
     197          <para>is the <application>NcFTP</application> Bookmark Editor
    198198          (<application>NCurses</application>-based).</para>
    199199          <indexterm zone="ncftp ncftpbookmarks">
    … …  
    206206        <term><command>ncftpget</command></term>
    207207        <listitem>
    208           <para>internet file transfer program for scripts.</para>
     208          <para>is an internet file transfer program for scripts used to
     209          retrieve files.</para>
    209210          <indexterm zone="ncftp ncftpget">
    210211            <primary sortas="b-ncftpget">ncftpget</primary>
    … …  
    216217        <term><command>ncftpls</command></term>
    217218        <listitem>
    218           <para>internet file transfer program for scripts.</para>
     219          <para>is an internet file transfer program for scripts used to
     220          list files.</para>
    219221          <indexterm zone="ncftp ncftpls">
    220222            <primary sortas="b-ncftpls">ncftpls</primary>
    … …  
    226228        <term><command>ncftpput</command></term>
    227229        <listitem>
    228           <para>internet file transfer program for scripts.</para>
     230          <para>is an internet file transfer program for scripts used to
     231          transfer files.</para>
    229232          <indexterm zone="ncftp ncftpput">
    230233            <primary sortas="b-ncftpput">ncftpput</primary>
    … …  
    236239        <term><command>ncftpspooler</command></term>
    237240        <listitem>
    238           <para>global batch FTP job processor daemon.</para>
     241          <para>is a global batch FTP job processor daemon.</para>
    239242          <indexterm zone="ncftp ncftpspooler">
    240243            <primary sortas="b-ncftpspooler">ncftpspooler</primary>

  • basicnet/netprogs/ncpfs.xml

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    8181
    8282    <para><parameter>--prefix=""</parameter>:
    83     installs binaries on the root partition so that they are available at
     83    Installs binaries on the root partition so that they are available at
    8484    boot time.  This may not be ideal for all systems.  If
    8585    <filename class="directory">/usr</filename> is mounted locally,
    8686    <parameter>--prefix=/usr</parameter> may be a better option.</para>
    8787
    88     <para><parameter>--includedir=/usr/include</parameter>: Tells configure
    89     to look in <filename class="directory">/usr/include</filename> for header
    90     files. It also tells make to install <application>NCPFS</application>'s
    91     headers here.</para>
    92 
    93     <para><parameter>--mandir=/usr/share/man</parameter>:  installs the man
     88    <para><parameter>--includedir=/usr/include</parameter>: Tells
     89    <command>configure</command> to look in
     90    <filename class="directory">/usr/include</filename> for header
     91    files. It also tells <command>make</command> to install
     92    <application>NCPFS</application>'s headers here.</para>
     93
     94    <para><parameter>--mandir=/usr/share/man</parameter>: Installs the man
    9495    pages in the correct location.</para>
    9596
    96     <para><parameter>--datadir=/usr/share</parameter>:  correctly installs the
     97    <para><parameter>--datadir=/usr/share</parameter>: Correctly installs the
    9798    locale files to <filename class="directory">/usr/share</filename>.</para>
    9899
    … …  
    150151      should be put in place of a password.</para>
    151152
    152       <para>It should be noted that the <command>ncpmount</command>
     153      <para>It should be noted that <command>ncpmount</command>
    153154      is not intended to mount individual volumes because each mount point
    154155      creates a separate client connection to the Novell server.  Mounting
    … …  
    195196      <segtitle>Server Admin Utilities</segtitle>
    196197      <segtitle>IPX Interface Utilities</segtitle>
    197       <segtitle>Other Utilitie</segtitle>
     198      <segtitle>Other Utilities</segtitle>
    198199      <segtitle>Installed Libraries</segtitle>
    199200      <segtitle>Installed Directories</segtitle>
    … …  
    218219
    219220</sect1>
    220 

  • basicnet/netprogs/ntp.xml

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    7878    <para>Now, as the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:</para>
    7979
    80 <screen role="root"><userinput>make install</userinput></screen>
    81 
    82     <para>Additionally, install the documentation by executing the following
    83         as the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:</para>
    84 
    85 <screen role="root"><userinput>install -v -m755 -d /usr/share/doc/ntp-&ntp-version; &amp;&amp;
     80<screen role="root"><userinput>make install &amp;&amp;
     81install -v -m755 -d /usr/share/doc/ntp-&ntp-version; &amp;&amp;
    8682cp -v -R html /usr/share/doc/ntp-&ntp-version;/</userinput></screen>
    8783
    … …  
    158154
    159155      <para>Execute the following command if you would like to set the
    160       hardware clock at shutdown and reboot based on the current system
    161       time:</para>
     156      hardware clock to the current system time at shutdown and reboot:</para>
    162157
    163158<screen role="root"><userinput>ln -v -sf ../init.d/setclock /etc/rc.d/rc0.d/K46setclock &amp;&amp;
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