Changeset 45db70f for postlfs/security/openssh.xml

Timestamp:

11/24/2016 04:05:14 PM (7 years ago)

Author:

DJ Lucas <dj@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

562355c

Parents:

f136bce

Message:

minor spelling and grammar fixes in postlfs/security.

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@18006 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

File:

• postlfs/security/openssh.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

postlfs/security/openssh.xml

@@ -36 +36 @@
     <para>
       The <application>OpenSSH</application> package contains
-      <command>ssh</command> clients and the <command>sshd</command> daemon. This
-      is useful for encrypting authentication and subsequent traffic over a
-      network. The <command>ssh</command> and <command>scp</command> commands are
-      secure implementions of <command>telnet</command> and <command>rcp</command>
-      respectively.
+      <command>ssh</command> clients and the <command>sshd</command> daemon.
+      This is useful for encrypting authentication and subsequent traffic over
+      a network. The <command>ssh</command> and <command>scp</command> commands
+      are secure implementations of <command>telnet</command> and
+      <command>rcp</command> respectively.
     </para>
 
@@ -157 +157 @@
       <command>scp</command> program to
       <filename class="directory">/usr/bin</filename>, making sure that you
-      back up any existing copy first.
+      backup any existing copy first.
     </para>