Changeset 5dee803 for pst/typesetting/texlive.xml

Timestamp:

08/28/2024 02:14:49 AM (3 weeks ago)

Author:

Douglas R. Reno <renodr@…>

Branches:

12.2, trunk

Children:

9fce64da

Parents:

8322ac92

git-author:

Douglas R. Reno <renodr@…> (08/28/2024 02:14:24 AM)

git-committer:

Douglas R. Reno <renodr@…> (08/28/2024 02:14:49 AM)

Message:

Style and text fixes for the Typesetting chapter

File:

• pst/typesetting/texlive.xml (modified) (4 diffs)

pst/typesetting/texlive.xml

@@ -138 +138 @@
         You must download it separately. This will give you all of the
         additional files which are provided by a full install of the binary
-        version, there is no realistic way to restrict which parts get
+        version, as there is no realistic way to restrict which parts get
         installed.
       </para>
@@ -144 +144 @@
       <para>
         Because of the size of this package, it is unlikely to be mirrored by
-        BLFS mirrors.  In case of difficulty, go to http://www.ctan.org/mirrors/
-        to find a more-accessible mirror.
+        BLFS mirrors. If you are unable to download the files for this package,
+        go to https://www.ctan.org/mirrors/ to find a more-accessible mirror.
       </para>
 
@@ -264 +264 @@
         A successful install requires some texlive
         commands to be run as the root user, so we will export the TEXARCH
-        variable to let <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> use it.
+        variable to let &root; use it.
       </para>
     </note>
@@ -410 +410 @@
 
     <para>
-      <command>-C</command>: create config.cache, this saves significant
+      <command>-C</command>: creates config.cache, which saves significant
       time in a parallel build.
     </para>