Changeset 65df9fca for server/other/rsync

Timestamp:

06/03/2004 02:41:04 AM (20 years ago)

Author:

Larry Lawrence <larry@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.2, 6.2.0, 6.2.0-rc1, 6.2.0-rc2, 6.3, 6.3-rc1, 6.3-rc2, 6.3-rc3, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, v5_1, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

2cbfd78a

Parents:

23d784b

Message:

grammar corrections

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@2252 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

Location:

server/other/rsync

Files:

• rsync-config.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• rsync-desc.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• rsync-exp.xml (deleted)
• rsync-inst.xml (modified) (1 diff)

server/other/rsync/rsync-config.xml

@@ -36 +36 @@
 script to be used.</para>
 
-<para>Install <filename>/etc/rc.d/init.d/rsyncd</filename>
+<para>Install the <filename>/etc/rc.d/init.d/rsyncd</filename>
 init script included in the <xref linkend="intro-important-bootscripts"/> package.</para>
                                                                                                                 

server/other/rsync/rsync-desc.xml

@@ -13 +13 @@
 uses the "rsync algorithm" which provides a very fast method of syncing remote
 files. It does this by sending just the differences in the files across the
-link, without requiring that both sets of files are present at one of the ends
+link, without requiring that both sets of files are present at one end
 of the link beforehand.</para></sect3>
 

server/other/rsync/rsync-inst.xml

@@ -2 +2 @@
 <title>Installation of <application>rsync</application></title>
 
-<para>For security reasons, running <application>rsync</application> server as 
-an unprivileged user and group is encouraged.</para>
+<para>For security reasons, running the <application>rsync</application> server as 
+an unprivileged user and group is encouraged.  Create the rsyncd user
+and group with the following commands:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput><command>groupadd rsyncd &amp;&amp;