Changeset 76a6005 for general/sysutils/elogind.xml

Timestamp:

10/27/2022 10:04:01 PM (18 months ago)

Author:

David Bryant <davidbryant@…>

Branches:

11.3, 12.0, 12.1, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, lazarus, lxqt, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, trunk, xry111/llvm18, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

c821a8f0

Parents:

cd3910d

git-author:

David Bryant <davidbryant@…> (10/27/2022 10:01:00 PM)

git-committer:

David Bryant <davidbryant@…> (10/27/2022 10:04:01 PM)

Message:

Removed redundant verbiage; edited for clarity.

File:

• general/sysutils/elogind.xml (modified) (5 diffs)

general/sysutils/elogind.xml

@@ -31 +31 @@
     <para>
       <application>elogind</application> is the
-      <application>systemd</application> project's "logind", extracted out to
+      <application>systemd</application> project's "logind", extracted to
       be a standalone daemon.  It integrates with <xref linkend="linux-pam"/>
-      to know the set of users that are logged in to a system and whether they
+      to track all the users logged in to a system, and whether they
       are logged in graphically, on the console, or remotely.
       <application>Elogind</application> exposes this information via the
       standard org.freedesktop.login1 <application>D-Bus</application>
-      interface, as well as through the file system using systemd's standard
+      interface, and also through the file system using systemd's standard
       <filename class="directory">/run/systemd</filename> layout.
     </para>
@@ -224 +224 @@
 
     <para>
-      <option>-Ddefault-kill-user-processes=false</option>: Configure whether
+      <option>-Ddefault-kill-user-processes=false</option>: Determines whether
       the processes of a user should be killed when the user logs out. The
       default is <emphasis>true</emphasis>, but this defeats the traditional
@@ -233 +233 @@
     <para>
       <command>ln -s ...</command>: These commands install symlinks so that
-      software packages find systemd compatible library and headers.
+      software packages can find the systemd-compatible library and headers.
     </para>
 
@@ -258 +258 @@
         The installed file <filename>/etc/elogind/logind.conf</filename>
         contains all the possible options with their defaults, commented
-        out. You may wish to disable killing user processes when the user logs
+        out. You may wish to disable automatically killing user processes when the user logs
         out, by running, as the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>
         user:
@@ -270 +270 @@
         <application>Linux-PAM</application> at login. The
         <filename>/etc/pam.d/system-session</filename> file needs to
-        be modified and a new file needs to be created in order for
+        be modified and a new file must be created in order for
         <command>elogind</command> to work correctly. Run the following
         commands as the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user: