Changeset 8c20276 for xsoft

Timestamp:

10/01/2003 01:39:48 PM (21 years ago)

Author:

Larry Lawrence <larry@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.2, 6.2.0, 6.2.0-rc1, 6.2.0-rc2, 6.3, 6.3-rc1, 6.3-rc2, 6.3-rc3, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, v5_0, v5_0-pre1, v5_1, v5_1-pre1, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

a679914

Parents:

46b80247

Message:

finally some typos and minor wording changes in Part 11

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@1256 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

Location:

xsoft

Files:

• graphweb/dillo/dillo-config.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• graphweb/galeon/galeon-desc.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• graphweb/mozilla/mozilla-exp.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• office/evolution/evolution-inst.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• office/gimp/gimp-config.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• suites/openoffice/openoffice-inst.xml (modified) (1 diff)

xsoft/graphweb/dillo/dillo-config.xml

@@ -3 +3 @@
 
 <sect3><title>Config files</title>
-<para>Site-wide configuration can be done using <filename>/etc/dillorc</filename>.  
+<para>System configuration can be done using <filename>/etc/dillorc</filename>.  
 This can be edited to define proxies and the default home page.</para>
 </sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>Configuration Information</title>
-<para><application>Dillo</application> stores its configuration in per-user 
-files in their <filename class="directory">~/.dillo</filename>
+<para><application>Dillo</application> stores its configuration in by user 
+in their <filename class="directory">~/.dillo</filename>
 directory. These files are created automatically when
 <command>dillo</command> is run.

xsoft/graphweb/galeon/galeon-desc.xml

@@ -17 +17 @@
 <sect3><title>galeon-config-tool</title>
 <para><command>galeon-config-tool</command> clears settings, installs schemas, 
-removes schemas and fixes permissions in gconf.</para></sect3>
+removes schemas and fixes permissions in the
+<application>GConf</application> database.</para></sect3>
 
 </sect2>

xsoft/graphweb/mozilla/mozilla-exp.xml

@@ -19 +19 @@
 
 <para><screen><option>--with-system-zlib --with-system-jpeg \
---with-system-png --with-system-mng"</option></screen>
+--with-system-png --with-system-mng</option></screen>
 Use the system versions for these packages.</para>
 

xsoft/office/evolution/evolution-inst.xml

@@ -20 +20 @@
 make install</command></userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Optionally, you may remove the installed db-&db-3.1-version;</para>
+<para>Optionally, you may remove <application>Berkeley
+DB</application>-&db-3.1-version; installed above with this command:</para>
 <screen><userinput><command>rm -rf /opt/db-&db-3.1-version;</command></userinput></screen>
 

xsoft/office/gimp/gimp-config.xml

@@ -8 +8 @@
 <sect3><title>Configuration Information</title>
 
-<para><command>gimp</command> executes a configuration wizard for each users 
-upon their initial invocation of the program.
-</para>
+<para><application><acronym>GIMP</acronym></application> executes a 
+configuration wizard for each users upon their initial invocation of the 
+program.</para>
 </sect3>
 

xsoft/suites/openoffice/openoffice-inst.xml

@@ -65 +65 @@
 installing, it needs a <application>X</application> Display, even though there 
 is no visible <application>X</application> window. You
-can use <application>>Xvfb</application> if you are compiling on a console.</para>
+can use <application>Xvfb</application> if you are compiling on a console.</para>
 
 <screen><userinput><command>cd instsetoo/unxlngi4.pro/01/normal &amp;&amp;