Changeset 8c9e2f6e for basicnet/connect/ppp.xml

Timestamp:

07/06/2009 07:12:40 PM (15 years ago)

Author:

Guy Dalziel <gdalziel@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

80a55003

Parents:

ac5d8cf

Message:

fixed typos on several pages

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@7831 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

File:

• basicnet/connect/ppp.xml (modified) (7 diffs)

basicnet/connect/ppp.xml

@@ -136 +136 @@
 
     <para><parameter>CBCP=y</parameter>: Add this argument to the
-    <command>make</command> command to compile in support for
+    <command>make</command> command to compile in support for the
     Microsoft proprietary Callback Control Protocol.</para>
 
@@ -166 +166 @@
       or <application>KPPP</application> from
       <xref linkend="kdenetwork"/>. The text below explains how to set up
-      dialup and GPRS and PPPoE connections using only tools provided with
+      dialup, GPRS and PPPoE connections using only tools provided with
       the <application>PPP</application> package. All configuration steps
-      in this section are executed as
+      in this section are executed as the
       <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user.</para>
 
@@ -217 +217 @@
       <para>If you use a caching DNS server such as <xref linkend="bind"/>
       or <ulink url="http://www.phys.uu.nl/~rombouts/pdnsd.html">Pdnsd</ulink>,
-      the script above is wrong for you. In such case, write your
+      the script above is wrong for you. In such a case, write your
       own script that tells your caching nameserver to forward queries to
       upstream DNS servers specified in the $DNS1 and $DNS2 environment
@@ -287 +287 @@
       it receives an indication of an error from the modem. Then the timeout
       is set to 5 seconds and the script checks that the modem responds to
-      the dummy AT command at all. If not, measures are taken to dewedge it
+      the dummy AT command. If not, measures are taken to dewedge it
       (by interrupting the data transfer and going on hook). Then the
       telephone number is dialed, and the script waits for the answer for
@@ -303 +303 @@
 
       <para>GPRS and EDGE connections are established with the help of a
-      cellular phone connected to a computer via serial or USB cable, or
-      using Bluetooth.
+      cellular phone connected to a computer via serial, USB, or Bluetooth.
       The phone exchanges data packets with the nearest base station,
       which can be up to 35 kilometers away.
@@ -356 +355 @@
 # Note: you must manually send some vendor-specific AT commands
 # to certain old cellular phones (such as Sony-Ericsson T200)
-# in order to achieve connection speed more than 9600 bits ber second.
+# in order to achieve connection speed more than 9600 bits per second.
 <replaceable>/dev/ttyS1</replaceable>
 <replaceable>115200</replaceable>
@@ -422 +421 @@
       <para>In order to establish a PPP connection described by the
       <filename>/etc/ppp/peers/<replaceable>peername</replaceable></filename>
-      file, run, as root or as a member of the
-      <systemitem class="groupname">pppusers</systemitem> group:</para>
+      file run (as <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> or as a member 
+      of the <systemitem class="groupname">pppusers</systemitem> group):</para>
 <screen><userinput>pon <replaceable>peername</replaceable></userinput></screen>