Changeset 8d284f50 for postlfs/security/openssh.xml

Timestamp:

02/21/2016 03:32:16 AM (8 years ago)

Author:

Douglas R. Reno <renodr@…>

Branches:

systemd-13485

Children:

4c845f18

Parents:

96b91da8

Message:

Typo fixes
Tags... the beginning.

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/branches/systemd@16989 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

File:

• postlfs/security/openssh.xml (modified) (5 diffs)

postlfs/security/openssh.xml

@@ -42 +42 @@
     </para>
 
-    &lfs78_checked;
+    &lfs79_checked;
 
     <bridgehead renderas="sect3">Package Information</bridgehead>
@@ -114 +114 @@
     <para>
       If reinstalling over an <application>SSH</application> connection to
-      enable <xref linkend="linux-pam"/> support, be certian to temporarily set
+      enable <xref linkend="linux-pam"/> support, be certain to temporarily set
       <option>PermitRootLogin</option> to <parameter>yes</parameter> in
       <filename>/etc/ssh/sshd_config</filename> until you complete
@@ -293 +293 @@
 
       <para>
-        If you added <application>LinuxPAM</application> support and you want
+        If you added <application>Linux-PAM</application> support and you want
         ssh to use it then you will need to add a configuration file for
         <application>sshd</application> and enable use of
-        <application>LinuxPAM</application>. Note, ssh only uses PAM to check
+        <application>Linux-PAM</application>. Note that ssh only uses PAM to check
         passwords, if you've disabled password logins these commands are not
         needed. If you want to use PAM issue the following commands as the
@@ -308 +308 @@
       <para>
         Additional configuration information can be found in the man
-        pages for <command>sshd</command>, <command>ssh</command> and
+        pages for <command>sshd</command>, <command>ssh</command>, and
         <command>ssh-agent</command>.
       </para>
@@ -333 +333 @@
           This package comes with two types of units: A service file and a socket file. 
           The service file will start sshd daemon once at boot and it will keep running until the 
-          system shuts down. The socket file will make systemd listen on sshd port (Default 22, needs 
+          system shuts down. The socket file will make systemd listen on sshd port (Default port is 22, it needs 
           to be edited for anything else) and will start sshd daemon when something tries to connect 
           to that port and stop the daemon when the connection is terminated. This is