Changeset 96ece2d7 for introduction/welcome

Timestamp:

02/12/2006 10:02:25 PM (18 years ago)

Author:

Randy McMurchy <randy@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 6.2, 6.2.0, 6.2.0-rc1, 6.2.0-rc2, 6.3, 6.3-rc1, 6.3-rc2, 6.3-rc3, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

2686d16

Parents:

4694b140

Message:

Text updates and corrections provided by a patch sent in by Chris Staub, thanks Chris

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@5674 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

Location:

introduction/welcome

Files:

• askhelp.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• changelog.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• which.xml (modified) (1 diff)

introduction/welcome/askhelp.xml

@@ -33 +33 @@
         <para>Is the hardware support compiled into the kernel or
         available as a module to the kernel?  If it is a module, is it
-        configured properly in <filename>modules.conf</filename> and has it
+        configured properly in <filename>modprobe.conf</filename> and has it
         been loaded?  You should use <command>lsmod</command> as the
         <systemitem class='username'>root</systemitem> user to see if it's
-        loaded. Check the <filename>syslog.log</filename> file or run
+        loaded. Check the <filename>sys.log</filename> file or run
         <command>modprobe <replaceable>[driver]</replaceable></command> to
         review any error message. If it loads properly, you may need to add
@@ -81 +81 @@
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-        <para>whether you have deviated from the book or LFS at all.</para>
+        <para>whether you have deviated from the book or LFS at all,</para>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+        <para>if you are installing a BLFS package on a non-LFS system.</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>

introduction/welcome/changelog.xml

@@ -46 +46 @@
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
+          <para>[randy] - Text updates and corrections provided by a patch
+          sent in by Chris Staub.</para>
+        </listitem>
+        <listitem>
           <para>[randy] - Replaced the commands to modify the *ns*.pc pkgconfig
           files with commands to create symlinks to the actual NSS/NSPR .pc

introduction/welcome/which.xml

@@ -44 +44 @@
   book as well as some items (such as <xref linkend="general-prog"/>)
   which are useful in their own right.  Note that you don't have to install all
-  of these libraries and packages found in this part to start with, each
+  of these libraries and packages found in this part to start with as each
   BLFS installation procedure tells you which packages
   it depends upon so you can choose the program you want to install and see