Changeset b4054a8

Timestamp:

07/27/2005 06:05:59 PM (19 years ago)

Author:

Randy McMurchy <randy@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 6.1, 6.2, 6.2.0, 6.2.0-rc1, 6.2.0-rc2, 6.3, 6.3-rc1, 6.3-rc2, 6.3-rc3, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

a2de57a7

Parents:

d9962703

Message:

Fixed typos in various Chapter 11 package instructions

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@4803 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

Location:

general/sysutils

Files:

• cpio.xml (modified) (3 diffs)
• fcron.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• hdparm.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• mc.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• which.xml (modified) (4 diffs)
• zip.xml (modified) (1 diff)

general/sysutils/cpio.xml

@@ -83 +83 @@
 
     <para><command>sed -i -e "s/invalid_arg/argmatch_invalid/" src/mt.c</command>:
-    This command fixes a build problem in the <command>mt</command> program.</para>
+    This command fixes a build problem with the <command>mt</command> program.</para>
 
     <para><parameter>CPIO_MT_PROG=mt</parameter>: This parameter forces the
@@ -98 +98 @@
     <para><parameter>--with-rmt=/usr/sbin/rmt</parameter>: This parameter inhibits
     building the <command>rmt</command> program as it is already installed by the
-    <application>tar</application> package in LFS.</para>
+    <application>Tar</application> package in LFS.</para>
 
     <para><command>echo "#define HAVE_SETLOCALE 1" >> config.h</command>:
@@ -155 +155 @@
 
 </sect1>
-

general/sysutils/fcron.xml

@@ -76 +76 @@
     needs to be done prior to installing <application>Fcron</application>. This
     command will append the necessary line to the current
-    <filename>/etc/syslog.conf</filename>:</para>
+    <filename>/etc/syslog.conf</filename> (perform as the
+    <systemitem class='username'>root</systemitem> user):</para>
 
     <indexterm zone="fcron fcron-syslog">
@@ -91 +92 @@
 
     <para>The configuration file has been modified, so reloading the
-    <command>sysklogd</command> daemon will activate the changes.</para>
+    <command>sysklogd</command> daemon will activate the changes (again as the
+    <systemitem class='username'>root</systemitem> user).</para>
 
 <screen role="root"><userinput>/etc/rc.d/init.d/sysklogd reload</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>For security reasons, an unprivileged user and group for
-    <application>Fcron</application> should be created:</para>
+    <application>Fcron</application> should be created (perform as the
+    <systemitem class='username'>root</systemitem> user):</para>
 
 <screen role="root"><userinput>groupadd -g 22 fcron &amp;&amp;

general/sysutils/hdparm.xml

@@ -38 +38 @@
       <application>hdparm</application> can destroy your information and in
       rare cases, drives. Use with caution and make sure you know what you are
-      doing. If in doubt, we recommend you leave the default kernel parameters
-      alone.</para>
+      doing. If in doubt, it is recommended that you leave the default kernel
+      parameters alone.</para>
     </warning>
 
@@ -127 +127 @@
 
 </sect1>
-

general/sysutils/mc.xml

@@ -83 +83 @@
 make</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>This package does not come with a testsuite.</para>
+    <para>This package does not come with a test suite.</para>
     
     <para>Now, as the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:</para>
@@ -129 +129 @@
         <seg>mc, mcedit, mcmfmt, and mcview</seg>
         <seg>None</seg>
-        <seg>/usr/share/mc, /usr/lib/mc</seg>
+        <seg>/usr/share/mc and /usr/lib/mc</seg>
       </seglistitem>
     </segmentedlist>

general/sysutils/which.xml

@@ -10 +10 @@
   <!ENTITY which-size          "123 KB">
   <!ENTITY which-buildsize     "940 KB">
-  <!ENTITY which-time          "0.03 SBU">
+  <!ENTITY which-time          "less than 0.1 SBU">
 ]>
 
@@ -34 +34 @@
   <quote><command>which</command></quote> is for you to decide.</para>
 
-  <para>The first option is to install the actual GNU program
-  <application>which</application>.</para>
+  <para>The first option is to install the actual GNU
+  <application>which</application> package.</para>
 
   <sect2 role="package">
@@ -119 +119 @@
     <title>The 'which' Script</title>
 
-    <para>The second option (for those who don't want to install the program)
+    <para>The second option (for those who don't want to install the package)
     is to create a simple script (execute as the
     <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user):</para>
@@ -136 +136 @@
 
 </sect1>
-

general/sysutils/zip.xml

@@ -87 +87 @@
     <filename class='directory'>/usr/local</filename> in the
     <filename>unix/Makefile</filename> which is used as a
-    <command>Makefile</command> and builds the executables for a Linux system. The
+    <filename>Makefile</filename> and builds the executables for a Linux system. The
     alternatives to <option>generic_gcc</option> can be seen with a
     <command>make -f unix/Makefile list</command> command.</para>