Changeset b69a5a5 for general/sysutils/sg3_utils.xml

Timestamp:

03/02/2016 03:44:14 AM (8 years ago)

Author:

Ken Moffat <ken@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 7.10, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

56afb2fe

Parents:

1b29dcac

Message:

Grammar fixes in sg3_utils command descriptions, based on systemd r17015.

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@17047 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

File:

• general/sysutils/sg3_utils.xml (modified) (19 diffs)

general/sysutils/sg3_utils.xml

@@ -154 +154 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            access Linux SCSI logging level information.
+            accesses Linux SCSI logging level information.
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="sg3_utils scsi_logging_level">
@@ -166 +166 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            check SCSI device support for mandatory commands.
+            checks SCSI device support for mandatory commands.
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="sg3_utils scsi_mandat">
@@ -178 +178 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            do SCSI READ CAPACITY command on disks.
+            does the SCSI READ CAPACITY command on disks.
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="sg3_utils scsi_readcap">
@@ -190 +190 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            do SCSI TEST UNIT READY on devices.
+            does the SCSI TEST UNIT READY on devices.
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="sg3_utils scsi_ready">
@@ -202 +202 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            check SCSI to ATA Translation (SAT) device support.
+            checks for SCSI to ATA Translation (SAT) device support.
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="sg3_utils scsi_satl">
@@ -214 +214 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            start one or more SCSI disks.
+            starts one or more SCSI disks.
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="sg3_utils scsi_start">
@@ -226 +226 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            stop one or more SCSI disks.
+            stops one or more SCSI disks.
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="sg3_utils scsi_stop">
@@ -238 +238 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            fetch the temperature of a SCSI device.
+            fetches the temperature of a SCSI device.
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="sg3_utils scsi_temperature">
@@ -313 +313 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            format or resize a SCSI disk (perhaps change its block size).
+            formats or resizes a SCSI disk (perhaps changes its block size).
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="sg3_utils sg_format">
@@ -535 +535 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            Display or Modify RDAC Redundant Controller Page.
+            displays or modifies RDAC Redundant Controller Page.
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="sg3_utils sg_rdac">
@@ -547 +547 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            read blocks of data continually from same offset.
+            reads blocks of data continually from the same offset.
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="sg3_utils sg_read">
@@ -631 +631 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            sends SCSI REPORT ZONES command.
+            sends a SCSI REPORT ZONES command.
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="sg3_utils sg_rep_zones">
@@ -667 +667 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            sends SCSI RESET WRITE POINTER command.
+            sends a SCSI RESET WRITE POINTER command.
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="sg3_utils sg_reset_wp">
@@ -703 +703 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            fetch status from a SCSI Accessed Fault-Tolerant Enclosure
+            fetches status from a SCSI Accessed Fault-Tolerant Enclosure
             (SAF-TE) device.
           </para>
@@ -728 +728 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            sends a ATA IDENTIFY (PACKET) DEVICE command via a SCSI to ATA
+            sends an ATA IDENTIFY (PACKET) DEVICE command via a SCSI to ATA
             Translation (SAT) layer.
           </para>
@@ -755 +755 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-             uses  ATA  READ  LOG EXT command via a SCSI to ATA Translation
+             uses an ATA READ LOG EXT command via a SCSI to ATA Translation
              (SAT) layer.
           </para>
@@ -767 +767 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            sends a ATA SET FEATURES command via a SCSI to ATA Translation
+            sends an ATA SET FEATURES command via a SCSI to ATA Translation
             (SAT) layer.
           </para>
@@ -830 +830 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            sends SCSI START STOP UNIT command to start, stop, load or eject
+            sends a SCSI START STOP UNIT command to start, stop, load or eject
             medium.
           </para>
@@ -904 +904 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            invoke SCSI VERIFY command(s) on a block device.
+            invokes SCSI VERIFY command(s) on a block device.
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="sg3_utils sg_verify">