Changeset dd01bb01 for lxqt/desktop/post-install.xml

Timestamp:

08/26/2023 12:59:13 AM (9 months ago)

Author:

Douglas R. Reno <renodr@…>

Branches:

12.0, 12.1, ken/TL2024, ken/tuningfonts, lazarus, plabs/newcss, python3.11, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, trunk, xry111/llvm18

Children:

315b576

Parents:

fd7e770a

Message:

Minor rewords and tweaks throughout LXQt

File:

• lxqt/desktop/post-install.xml (modified) (4 diffs)

lxqt/desktop/post-install.xml

@@ -19 +19 @@
 
     <para>
-      Final instructions before starting <application>LXQt</application> for
-      the first time.
+      Please follow these instructions before starting
+      <application>LXQt</application> for the first time.
     </para>
 
@@ -51 +51 @@
     <title>Final Configuration</title>
 
-    <sect3 id="lxqt-final-updates" xreflabel="LXQt Final Updates">
-      <title>LXQt Final Updates</title>
+    <sect3 id="lxqt-final-updates" xreflabel="LXQt Final Database Updates">
+      <title>LXQt Final Database Updates</title>
 
       <para>
-        The desktop databases have to be created or updated at this point.
+        The desktop databases need to be created or updated at this point.
         Run the following commands as the &root; user:
       </para>
@@ -96 +96 @@
     <para>
       The X session starts on the first unused virtual terminal, normally vt1.
-      You can switch to another vt<emphasis>n</emphasis> simultaneously
+      You can switch to another vt<emphasis>n</emphasis> by simultaneously
       pressing the keys Ctrl-Alt-F<emphasis>n</emphasis>
       (<emphasis>n</emphasis>=2, 3, ...).  To switch back to the X session,
@@ -102 +102 @@
       <command>startx</command> was executed will display many messages,
       including X starting messages, applications automatically started with
-      the session, and eventually, some warning and error messages, but are
-      hidden by the graphical interface. You may prefer to redirect those
-      messages to a log file, which can  be used for debug purposes. This can
-      be done starting X with:
+      the session, and eventually, some warning and error messages, but these
+      are hidden by the graphical interface. You may prefer to redirect those
+      messages to a log file, which can be used for debugging purposes. This
+      can be done starting X with:
     </para>