Changeset eac1ee9 for multimedia/videoutils/mplayer

Timestamp:

06/05/2004 02:03:59 AM (20 years ago)

Author:

Larry Lawrence <larry@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.2, 6.2.0, 6.2.0-rc1, 6.2.0-rc2, 6.3, 6.3-rc1, 6.3-rc2, 6.3-rc3, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, v5_1, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

52a46b3a

Parents:

a3b2641

Message:

multimedia, pst grammar

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@2270 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

Location:

multimedia/videoutils/mplayer

Files:

• mplayer-config.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• mplayer-desc.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• mplayer-inst.xml (modified) (3 diffs)
• mplayer-intro.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-config.xml

@@ -21 +21 @@
 </para>
 
-<para>Set the proper permissions for <acronym>CODEC</acronym>s, skins and fonts:</para>
+<para>Set the proper ownership for <acronym>CODEC</acronym>s, skins and fonts:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput><command>chown -R root:root <replaceable>[CODECs location]</replaceable> &amp;&amp;

multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-desc.xml

@@ -22 +22 @@
 mplayer http://www.students.uni-marburg.de/~Klossa/hapkidofight_lo.mpg</command></screen>
 
-<para>For further information, have a look at the very good
-documentation included in the package in the subdirectory <filename
+<para>For further information, look at the very good
+documentation included with the package in the source tree subdirectory <filename
 class="directory">DOCS/</filename>.
 </para></sect3>

multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-inst.xml

@@ -27 +27 @@
 <para>The <acronym>GUI</acronym> version of
 <application>MPlayer</application> requires a skin. Extract the default
-one at recommended location:</para>
+one to the recommended location:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput><command>install -d /usr/share/mplayer/Skin &amp;&amp;
@@ -42 +42 @@
 
 <para>Replace <replaceable>[dvd drive]</replaceable> with whatever
-device is appropriate, for example <filename>/dev/hdc</filename>. if
+device is appropriate, for example <filename>/dev/hdc</filename>. If
 you don't know which device to choose, type:</para>
 
@@ -54 +54 @@
 <para>If you have SCSI-Emulation activated for the drives, you'll need
 to get the right SCSI-device. Every CD/DVD-ROM drive is mapped in the
-same order as in <acronym>IDE</acronym> to the devices named
+same order as in <acronym>IDE</acronym> devices to the devices named
 <filename>/dev/scd0</filename>,
 <filename>/dev/scd1</filename> and so on.</para>

multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-intro.xml

@@ -3 +3 @@
 
 <para>The <application>MPlayer</application> package contains an audio/video player that is able to
-play almost every audio and video <acronym>CODEC</acronym> and can be controlled by command
-line or <acronym>GUI</acronym>.</para>
+play almost every audio and video <acronym>CODEC</acronym> and can be
+controlled via the command
+line or a <acronym>GUI</acronym>.</para>
 
 <sect3><title>Package information</title>
@@ -26 +27 @@
 </itemizedlist>
 
-<note><para>These are not required to build and use MPlayer. You can
+<note><para>The additional downloads are not required to build and use MPlayer. You can
 find many more <acronym>CODEC</acronym>s, skins and fonts at <ulink
 url="http://www.mplayerhq.hu/">MPlayer's homepage</ulink>.</para></note>