Changeset f0ca372c for general/genutils/xscreensaver.xml

Timestamp:

10/26/2014 04:30:14 PM (10 years ago)

Author:

Krejzi <krejzi@…>

Branches:

krejzi/svn

Children:

2281fabd

Parents:

0dc3f24

Message:

Updates and new packages for general utils section.

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/branches/systemd-ng@14745 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

File:

• general/genutils/xscreensaver.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

general/genutils/xscreensaver.xml

@@ -93 +93 @@
     <bridgehead renderas="sect4">Optional</bridgehead>
     <para role="optional">
-      <ulink url="&gnome-download-http;/gdm/">GDM</ulink>,
+      <xref linkend="gdm"/>,
       <ulink url="http://linas.org/gle/">GLE</ulink> and
       <xref linkend="linux-pam"/>
@@ -161 +161 @@
 
       <para>
-        If <application>XScreenSaver</application> has been built with
-        <application>Linux PAM</application> support, you need to create a
-        <application>PAM</application> configuration file, to get it working
-        correctly with BLFS.
+        If you have built <application>XScreenSaver</application> with
+        <application>Linux PAM</application> support, you need to create
+        <application>PAM</application> configuration file to get
+        <application>XScreenSaver</application> to work correctly with BLFS.
       </para>
 
       <para>
-        Issue the following commands as the <systemitem
-        class="username">root</systemitem> user to create the configuration
-        file for <application>Linux PAM</application>:
+        Issue the following commands as the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>
+        user to create the configuration file for <application>Linux PAM</application>:
       </para>