Changeset 0c6dc0d

Timestamp:

03/15/2001 04:05:36 PM (23 years ago)

Author:

Simon Perreault <nomis80@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.1.1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, v3_0, v3_1, v3_2, v3_3, v4_0, v4_1, v5_0, v5_1, v5_1_1, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

810a05b

Parents:

f311f27

Message:

Grammar fixes.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@322 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Location:

preface

Files:

• organization.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• organpart1.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• whonotread.xml (modified) (1 diff)

preface/organization.xml

@@ -5 +5 @@
 This book is divided into the following parts. Although there is a lot
 of duplicate information in certain parts, it's the easiest way to read it
-and not to mention the easiest way for me to maintain the book.
+and, not to mention, the easiest way for me to maintain the book.
 </para>
 

preface/organpart1.xml

@@ -4 +4 @@
 <para>
 Part One gives you general information about this book (versions, where
-to get it, changelog, mailinglists and how to get in touch with me).
+to get it, changelog, mailing lists, and how to get in touch with me).
 It also explains a few important aspects you really want and need to
-read
-before you start building an LFS system.
+read before you start building an LFS system.
 </para>
 

preface/whonotread.xml

@@ -8 +8 @@
 between turning on your computer and seeing the command prompt, you want
 to read the <quote>From Power Up To Bash Prompt</quote> (P2B) HOWTO.
-This HOWTO builds a bare system, in a similar way as this book does, but it
-focusses more on just installing a bootable system instead of a complete
-system.
+This HOWTO builds a bare system, in way similar to the one this book
+uses, but it focusses more on just installing a bootable system instead
+of a complete system.
 </para>
 
 <para>
 To decide whether you want to read this book or the P2B HOWTO, you could
-ask yourself this question: Is my main objective to get a working Linux
-system that I'm going to build myself and along the way learn and
-learn what every component of a system is for, or is just the learning
-part your main objective. If you want to build and learn, read this
-book. If you just want to learn, then the P2B HOWTO is probably better
-material to read.
+ask yourself this question: "Is my main objective to get a working Linux
+system that I'm going to build myself and, along the way, learn what
+every component of a system is for, or is just the learning part my main
+objective?" If you want to build and learn, read this book. If you just
+want to learn, then the P2B HOWTO is probably better material to read.
 </para>