Changeset 810a05b

Timestamp:

03/15/2001 04:12:15 PM (23 years ago)

Author:

Simon Perreault <nomis80@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.1.1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, v3_0, v3_1, v3_2, v3_3, v4_0, v4_1, v5_0, v5_1, v5_1_1, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

44512db5

Parents:

0c6dc0d

Message:

Grammar fixes.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@323 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• chapter01/introduction.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter01/introduction.xml

@@ -6 +6 @@
 satisfied with any of those. I didn't like the way the bootscripts were
 arranged, or I didn't like the way certain programs were configured by
-default and more of those things. I came to realize that when I want to
+default, and more of those things. I came to realize that when I want to
 be totally satisfied with a Linux system, I have to build my own Linux
-system from scratch, ideally only using the source code. Not using 
-pre-compiled packages of any kind. No help from some sort of cdrom or 
+system from scratch, ideally using only the source code. Not using 
+precompiled packages of any kind. No help from some sort of CD-ROM or 
 bootdisk that would install some basic utilities. You would use your current 
 Linux system and use that one to build your own.
@@ -15 +15 @@
 
 <para>
-This, at one time, wild idea seemed very difficult and at times almost
+This, at one time, wild idea seemed very difficult and, at times, almost
 impossible. The reason for most problems were due to my lack of knowledge
 about certain programs and procedures. After sorting out all kinds of
-dependency problems, compilation problems, etcetera, a custom built Linux
+dependency problems, compilation problems, etcetera, a custom-built Linux
 system was created and fully operational. I called this system an LFS
-system, which stands for LinuxFromScratch.
+system, which stands for Linux From Scratch.
 </para>