Changeset 0d84af1 for chapter07

Timestamp:

12/28/2017 03:52:38 AM (6 years ago)

Author:

Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@…>

Branches:

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Children:

25332b5

Parents:

9fde3e9

Message:

Typos and wording changes

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@11343 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Location:

chapter07

Files:

• clock.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• consoled.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• inputrc.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• locale.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• systemd-custom.xml (modified) (3 diffs)
• udev.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter07/clock.xml

@@ -66 +66 @@
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>timedatectl set-timezone TIMEZONE</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para>You can get list of available time zones by running:</para>
+  <para>You can get a list of available time zones by running:</para>
 
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>timedatectl list-timezones</userinput></screen>
 
-  <note><para>Please note that <command>timedatectl</command> command can
+  <note><para>Please note that the <command>timedatectl</command> command can
   be used only on a system booted with systemd.</para></note>
 

chapter07/consoled.xml

@@ -87 +87 @@
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>localectl set-keymap MAP</userinput></screen>
 
-  <note><para>Please note that <command>localectl</command> command can
-  be used  only on a system booted with systemd.</para></note>
+  <note><para>Please note that the <command>localectl</command> command can
+  be used only on a system booted with systemd.</para></note>
 
   <para>You can also use <command>localectl</command> utility with the
@@ -132 +132 @@
   </variablelist>
 
-  <note><para>Using any of the parameters listed above requires
+  <note><para>Using any of the parameters listed above requires the
   XKeyboard Config package from BLFS.</para></note>
 

chapter07/inputrc.xml

@@ -16 +16 @@
 
   <para>The <filename>inputrc</filename> file is the configuration file for
-  Readline library, which provides editing capabilities while the user is
+  then Readline library, which provides editing capabilities while the user is
   entering  a line from the terminal. It works by tranlating keyboard inputs
   into specific actions.  Readline is used by Bash and most other shells as

chapter07/locale.xml

@@ -119 +119 @@
 EOF</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para>Note that you can modify <filename>/etc/locale.conf</filename> with
-  systemd <command>localectl</command> utility. To use <command>localectl</command>
-  for the example above, run:</para>
+  <para>Note that you can modify <filename>/etc/locale.conf</filename> with the
+  systemd <command>localectl</command> utility. To use
+  <command>localectl</command> for the example above, run:</para>
 
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>localectl set-locale LANG="<replaceable>&lt;ll&gt;_&lt;CC&gt;.&lt;charmap&gt;&lt;@modifiers&gt;</replaceable>"</userinput></screen>
@@ -133 +133 @@
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>localectl set-locale LANG="en_US.UTF-8" LC_CTYPE="en_US"</userinput></screen>
 
-  <note><para>Please note that <command>localectl</command> command can
-  be used  only on a system booted with systemd.</para></note>
+  <note><para>Please note that the <command>localectl</command> command can
+  be used only on a system booted with systemd.</para></note>
 
   <para>The <quote>C</quote> (default) and <quote>en_US</quote> (the recommended

chapter07/systemd-custom.xml

@@ -22 +22 @@
     entries commented out with the default settings indicated. This file is
     where the log level may be changed as well as some basic logging settings.
-    See <filename>systemd-system.conf(5)</filename> manual page for details on
-    each configuration option.</para>
+    See the <filename>systemd-system.conf(5)</filename> manual page for details
+    on each configuration option.</para>
 
   </sect2>
@@ -213 +213 @@
     <title>Long Running Processes</title>
 
-    <para>Beginning with systemd-230, all user processes are killed when a
-    user session is ended, even if nohup is used, or the process uses
-    <function>daemon()</function> or <function>setsid()</function>. This is a
-    deliberate change from a historically permissive environment to a more
-    restrictive one. The new behavior may cause issues if you depend on long
-    running programs (e.g., <command>screen</command> or
-    <command>tmux</command>) to remain active after ending your user
-    session. There are three ways to enable lingering processes to remain after
-    a user session is ended.</para>
+    <para>Beginning with systemd-230, all user processes are killed when a user
+    session is ended, even if nohup is used, or the process uses the
+    <function>daemon()</function> or <function>setsid()</function> functions.
+    This is a deliberate change from a historically permissive environment to a
+    more restrictive one. The new behavior may cause issues if you depend on
+    long running programs (e.g., <command>screen</command> or
+    <command>tmux</command>) to remain active after ending your user session.
+    There are three ways to enable lingering processes to remain after a user
+    session is ended.</para>
 
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          <emphasis>Enable process lingering for only needed users</emphasis>:
-          normal users have permission to enable process lingering
+          <emphasis>Enable process lingering for only selected users</emphasis>:
+          Normal users have permission to enable process lingering
           with the command <command>loginctl enable-linger</command> for their
           own user. System administrators can use the same command with a
@@ -245 +245 @@
         <para>
           <emphasis>Enable system-wide process lingering</emphasis>:
-          you can set <parameter>KillUserProcesses=no</parameter> in
+          You can set <parameter>KillUserProcesses=no</parameter> in
           <filename>/etc/logind.conf</filename> to enable process lingering
           globally for all users. This has the benefit of leaving the old

chapter07/udev.xml

@@ -210 +210 @@
       intended to load it</title>
 
-      <para>If the <quote>wrapper</quote> module only enhances the functionality
-      provided by some other module (e.g., <emphasis>snd-pcm-oss</emphasis>
-      enhances the functionality of <emphasis>snd-pcm</emphasis> by making the
-      sound cards available to OSS applications), configure
-      <command>modprobe</command> to load the wrapper after Udev loads the
-      wrapped module. To do this, add a <quote>softdep</quote> line in any
+      <para>If the <quote>wrapper</quote> module only enhances the
+      functionality provided by some other module (e.g.,
+      <emphasis>snd-pcm-oss</emphasis> enhances the functionality of
+      <emphasis>snd-pcm</emphasis> by making the sound cards available to OSS
+      applications), configure <command>modprobe</command> to load the wrapper
+      after Udev loads the wrapped module. To do this, add a
+      <quote>softdep</quote> line to the corresponding
       <filename>/etc/modprobe.d/<replaceable>&lt;filename&gt;</replaceable>.conf</filename>
       file. For example:</para>