Changeset 0d84af1 for chapter08

Timestamp:

12/28/2017 03:52:38 AM (6 years ago)

Author:

Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

25332b5

Parents:

9fde3e9

Message:

Typos and wording changes

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@11343 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter08/kernel.xml (modified) (5 diffs)

chapter08/kernel.xml

@@ -73 +73 @@
       into account.</para>
 
-      <para>Be sure to enable or disable following features or the system might
+      <para>Be sure to enable or disable the following features or the system might
       not work correctly or boot at all:</para>
 
@@ -218 +218 @@
 
     <caution>
-      <para>If the host system has a separate /boot partition, the
-      files copied below should go there. The easiest way to do that 
-      is to bind /boot on the host to /mnt/lfs/boot before proceeding.
-      As the root user in the <emphasis>host system</emphasis>:</para>
+      <para>If the host system has a separate /boot partition, the files copied
+      below should go there. The easiest way to do that is to bind /boot on the
+      host (outside chroot) to /mnt/lfs/boot before proceeding.  As the root
+      user in the <emphasis>host system</emphasis>:</para>
 
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>mount --bind /boot /mnt/lfs/boot</userinput></screen>
@@ -232 +232 @@
     following command assumes an x86 architecture:</para>
 
-<screen revision="sysv"><userinput remap="install">cp -v arch/x86/boot/bzImage /boot/vmlinuz-&linux-version;-lfs-&version;</userinput></screen>
-
-<screen revision="systemd"><userinput remap="install">cp -v arch/x86/boot/bzImage /boot/vmlinuz-&linux-version;-lfs-&versiond;</userinput></screen>
+<screen revision="sysv"><userinput remap="install">cp -iv arch/x86/boot/bzImage /boot/vmlinuz-&linux-version;-lfs-&version;</userinput></screen>
+
+<screen revision="systemd"><userinput remap="install">cp -iv arch/x86/boot/bzImage /boot/vmlinuz-&linux-version;-lfs-&versiond;</userinput></screen>
 
     <para><filename>System.map</filename> is a symbol file for the kernel.
@@ -242 +242 @@
     Issue the following command to install the map file:</para>
 
-<screen><userinput remap="install">cp -v System.map /boot/System.map-&linux-version;</userinput></screen>
+<screen><userinput remap="install">cp -iv System.map /boot/System.map-&linux-version;</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>The kernel configuration file <filename>.config</filename>
@@ -250 +250 @@
     reference:</para>
 
-<screen><userinput remap="install">cp -v .config /boot/config-&linux-version;</userinput></screen>
+<screen><userinput remap="install">cp -iv .config /boot/config-&linux-version;</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>Install the documentation for the Linux kernel:</para>