Changeset 137bd50 for chapter07/network.xml

Timestamp:

03/18/2001 08:39:49 PM (23 years ago)

Author:

Thomas Balu Walter <tw@…>

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• chapter07/network.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter07/network.xml

@@ -3 +3 @@
 
 <para>
-Create a new file <filename>/etc/sysconfig/network</filename> and put the 
-hostname in it by running:
+A new file <filename>/etc/sysconfig/network</filename> is created and the 
+hostname is put in it by running:
 </para>
 
@@ -14 +14 @@
 
 <para>
-Replace <quote>lfs</quote> by the name you wish to call your computer.
-Please not that you should not enter the FQDN (Fully Qualified Domain
+<quote>lfs</quote> needs to be replaced by the name the computer is to be 
+called.
+A user should not enter the FQDN (Fully Qualified Domain
 Name) here. That information will be put in the
 <filename>/etc/hosts</filename> file later.