Changeset 2256873 for chapter05/tcl.xml

Timestamp:

10/06/2004 10:58:24 PM (20 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

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Last edit round.

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• chapter05/tcl.xml (modified) (7 diffs)

chapter05/tcl.xml

@@ -22 +22 @@
 <segtitle>Tcl installation depends on</segtitle>
 <seglistitem><seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils,
-GCC, Glibc, Grep, Make and Sed</seg></seglistitem>
+GCC, Glibc, Grep, Make, and Sed</seg></seglistitem>
 </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -55 +55 @@
 the time zone to Coordinated Universal Time (UTC), also known as
 Greenwich Mean Time (GMT), but only for the duration of the test suite
-run. This ensures that the clock tests are exercised correctly. More
-information on the <envar>TZ</envar> environment variable is provided in <xref
-linkend="chapter-bootscripts"/>.</para>
+run. This ensures that the clock tests are exercised correctly.
+Details on the <envar>TZ</envar> environment variable is provided in
+<xref linkend="chapter-bootscripts"/>.</para>
 
 <para>Install the package:</para>
@@ -63 +63 @@
 <screen><userinput>make install</userinput></screen>
 
+<beginpage/>
 <warning><para><emphasis>Do not</emphasis> remove the
 <filename class="directory">tcl&tcl-version;</filename> source directory yet, as the next package
@@ -81 +82 @@
 </segmentedlist>
 
-<variablelist><bridgehead renderas="sect3">Short descriptions</bridgehead>
+<variablelist><bridgehead renderas="sect3">Short Descriptions</bridgehead>
 <?dbfo list-presentation="list"?>
 
@@ -87 +88 @@
 <term><command>tclsh8.4</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>the Tcl command shell.</para>
+<para>The Tcl command shell</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-tools-tcl tclsh8.4"><primary sortas="b-tclsh8.4">tclsh8.4</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>
@@ -95 +96 @@
 <term><command>tclsh</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>link to tclsh8.4</para>
+<para>A link to tclsh8.4</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-tools-tcl tclsh"><primary sortas="b-tclsh">tclsh</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>
@@ -103 +104 @@
 <term><filename class="libraryfile">libtcl8.4.so</filename></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>the Tcl library.</para>
+<para>The Tcl library</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-tools-tcl libtcl8.4.so"><primary sortas="c-libtcl8.4.so">libtcl8.4.so</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>