Changeset 2483c44


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Timestamp:
03/15/2001 04:54:07 PM (23 years ago)
Author:
Simon Perreault <nomis80@…>
Branches:
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Children:
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Parents:
44512db5
Message:

Grammar fixes.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@325 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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chapter01
Files:
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  • chapter01/alfsdiscuss.xml

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    44<para>
    5 The alfs-discuss list discusses the development of ALFS which stands for
    6 Automated LinuxFromScratch. The goal of this project is to develop an
     5The alfs-discuss list discusses the development of ALFS, which stands for
     6Automated Linux From Scratch. The goal of this project is to develop an
    77installation tool that can install an LFS system automatically for you.
    88It's main goal is to speed up compilation by taking away your need to
    9 manually enter the commands to configure, compile and install packages.
     9manually enter the commands to configure, compile, and install packages.
    1010</para>
    1111

  • chapter01/changelog.xml

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    44<para>
    5 If, for example, a change is listed for chapter 5 it (usually) means the
    6 same change has been made in the chapters for the other architectures.
     5If, for example, a change is listed for chapter 5, it (usually) means the
     6same change has been made in the corresponding chapter for the other
     7architectures.
    78</para>
    89
    … …  
    2425<listitem><para>
    2526Chapter 4: Changed the wording to make it more general as ext2 no
    26 longer is the only used file system. Reiser for example is often used
     27longer is the only used file system. Reiserfs, for example, is often used
    2728too now.
    2829</para></listitem>
    2930
    3031<listitem><para>
    31 Chapter 5: Added static mawk, texinfo and partially gettext to faciliate
     32Chapter 5: Added static mawk, texinfo, and partially gettext to faciliate
    3233the move of Glibc from Chapter 5 to Chapter 6.
    3334</para></listitem>
    … …  
    3839used to create device files. This second file (MAKEDEV-temp) doesn't
    3940contain user names and group names but only user id's and group id's. We
    40 need a few device files to get Glibc installed, but before GLibc is
    41 installed user and group names are not recognized yet; only the numeric
     41need a few device files to get Glibc installed, but, before Glibc is
     42installed, user and group names are not recognized yet, only the numeric
    4243id's. This requires a slightly modified MAKEDEV script which will be
    4344generated by patching the original one. This patching is done here in
    … …  
    5152
    5253<listitem><para>
    53 Chapter 5: Simplified ln commands
     54Chapter 5: Simplified ln commands.
    5455</para></listitem>
    5556
    … …  
    7475
    7576<listitem><para>
    76 Chapter 5+6: Upgraded from gcc-2.95.2 to gcc-2.95.2.1
     77Chapter 5+6: Upgraded gcc-2.95.2 to gcc-2.95.2.1.
    7778</para></listitem>
    7879
    7980<listitem><para>
    80 Chapter 5+6: Moved Glibc from chapter 5 to chapter 6
     81Chapter 5+6: Moved Glibc from chapter 5 to chapter 6.
    8182</para></listitem>
    8283
    8384<listitem><para>
    84 Chapter 6: Changed libexecdir=/usr/bin in fileutils to libexecdir=/bin
     85Chapter 6: Changed libexecdir=/usr/bin in fileutils to libexecdir=/bin.
    8586</para></listitem>
    8687
    8788<listitem><para>
    88 Chapter 6: Updated Glibc installation instructions. 'configparms' file
     89Chapter 6: Updated Glibc installation instructions. The 'configparms' file
    8990creation has been deleted. No need to pick a compiler (either distro's
    9091native or the /usr/local/gcc2952/bin/gcc one); we're in chroot
    91 now so we'll use the one we have 
     92now so we'll use the one we have.
    9293</para></listitem>
    9394
    … …  
    114115
    115116<listitem><para>
    116 Chapter 6: When entering chroot the $TERM variable inside chroot is set
     117Chapter 6: When entering chroot, the $TERM variable inside chroot is set
    117118properly. This is accomplished by: chroot ... -i HOME=/root TERM=$TERM ...
    118119</para></listitem>
    … …  
    125126<listitem><para>
    126127Chapter 6: Changed all "rm file &amp;&amp; ln -s dest file" into
    127 "ln -sf file" (in glibc, bzip2 and gzip installation).
     128"ln -sf file" (in glibc, bzip2 and gzip installations).
    128129</para></listitem>
    129130
    130131<listitem><para>
    131132Chapter 7: Fixed the delays in the killproc function in the functions
    132 script. Now after kill, first check PIDs, then sleep 2 if needed. More
     133script. Now, after kill, first check PIDs, then sleep 2 if needed. More
    133134details can be read in the comments in the script itself.
    134135</para></listitem>

  • chapter01/contactinfo.xml

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    55Direct all your emails to the
    66<ulink url="mailto:lfs-discuss@linuxfromscratch.org">lfs-discuss
    7 </ulink> mailinglist preferably.
     7</ulink> mailing list preferably.
    88</para>
    99

  • chapter01/lfsannounce.xml

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    66you can't post any messages to this list. This list is used to announce
    77new stable releases. If you want to be informed about development
    8 releases as well then you'll have to join the lfs-discuss list. If
    9 you're already on the lfs-discuss list there's little use subscribing to
     8releases as well, then you'll have to join the lfs-discuss list. If
     9you're already on the lfs-discuss list, there's little use subscribing to
    1010this list as well because everything that is posted to the lfs-announce
    1111list will be posted to the lfs-discuss list as well.

  • chapter01/lfsdiscuss.xml

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    44<para>
    5 The lfs-discuss mailinglist discusses matters strictly related to the
     5The lfs-discuss mailing list discusses matters strictly related to the
    66LFS-BOOK. If you have problems with the book, want to report a bug or
    7 two or have suggestions to improve the book, use this mailinglist.
     7two, or have suggestions to improve the book, use this mailing list.
    88</para>
    99

  • chapter01/lfssecurity.xml

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    44<para>
    5 The lfs-security mailinglist discusses security related matters. If you
     5The lfs-security mailing list discusses security-related matters. If you
    66have security concerns or have heard about a package used by LFS that
    77has known security problems, you can address that on this list.

  • chapter01/maillists.xml

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    11<sect1 id="ch01-maillists">
    2 <title>Mailinglists and archives</title>
     2<title>Mailing lists and archives</title>
    33
    44<para>
    5 The linuxfromscratch.org server is hosting the following public accessible
    6 mailinglists:
     5The linuxfromscratch.org server is hosting the following publicly accessible
     6mailing lists:
    77</para>
    88
    … …  
    1414
    1515<listitem><para>
    16         lfs-apps
     16    lfs-apps
    1717</para></listitem>
    1818
    … …  
    2626
    2727<listitem><para>
    28         alfs-discuss
     28    alfs-discuss
    2929</para></listitem>
    3030
    3131<listitem><para>
    32         alfs-docs
     32    alfs-docs
    3333</para></listitem>
    3434
    3535<listitem><para>
    36         alfs-ipc
     36    alfs-ipc
    3737</para></listitem>
    3838
    3939<listitem><para>
    40         alfs-profile
     40    alfs-profile
    4141</para></listitem>
    4242
    4343<listitem><para>
    44         alfs-backend
     44    alfs-backend
    4545</para></listitem>
    4646

  • chapter01/othermodes.xml

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    1010
    1111<para>
    12 As the name implies the <emphasis>Set command</emphasis> tells you what
     12As the name implies, the <emphasis>Set command</emphasis> tells you what
    1313to write to set a mode. The <emphasis>Unset command</emphasis> tells
    1414you what to write to unset a mode.
    … …  
    1818Replace listname in the example subject headers with the listname to which
    1919you want to apply the mode to. If you want to set more than one mode (to
    20 the same list or multiple lists) with one email you can do so by writing
     20the same list or multiple lists) with one email, you can do so by writing
    2121junk in the subject header like "hello" and then put the commands in the
    2222body of the message instead.
    … …  
    3535<para>
    3636All lists have the digest mode available and you can set yourself to
    37 digest mode, after you subscribe to a list. Being in digest mode will
     37digest mode after you subscribe to a list. Being in digest mode will
    3838cause you to stop receiving individual messages as they are posted to
    3939the list and instead you will receive one email daily containing all
    40 the messages posted to the list that day.
     40the messages posted to the list during that day.
    4141</para>
    4242
    … …  
    4444There is a second digest mode called digest2. When you are set to this
    4545mode you will receive the daily digests but you will also continue to
    46 receive the individual messages to the lists are they are posted. To
     46receive the individual messages to the lists as they are posted. To
    4747set yourself to this mode write <emphasis>digest2</emphasis> instead of
    4848<emphasis>digest</emphasis> in the subject header.
    … …  
    6161<para>
    6262If you are going to be away for a while or wish to stop receiving
    63 messages from the lists but you don't want to unsubscribe you can set
     63messages from the lists but you don't want to unsubscribe, you can set
    6464yourself to vacation mode. This has the same effect as unsubscribing
    6565yourself, but you don't have to go through the unsubscribe process and

  • chapter01/subscribe.xml

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    44<para>
    5 You can subscribe to any of the above mentioned mailinglists by sending
     5You can subscribe to any of the above-mentioned mailinglists by sending
    66an email to <ulink url="mailto:listar@linuxfromscratch.org">
    77listar@linuxfromscratch.org</ulink> and write <emphasis>subscribe

  • chapter01/unsubscribe.xml

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    2525unsubscribe lfs-apps
    2626unsubscribe alfs-discuss
     27
    2728</literallayout></blockquote>
    2829
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