Changeset 01c8218

Timestamp:

03/15/2001 05:01:05 PM (23 years ago)

Author:

Simon Perreault <nomis80@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.1.1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, v3_0, v3_1, v3_2, v3_3, v4_0, v4_1, v5_0, v5_1, v5_1_1, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

a8e58c7e

Parents:

2483c44

Message:

Grammar fixes.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@326 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Location:

chapter02

Files:

• aboutlfs.xml (modified) (3 diffs)
• download.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter02/aboutlfs.xml

@@ -7 +7 @@
 replaced by the directory where the partition that contains the LFS system 
 is mounted. How to create and where to mount the partition will be
-explaind in full detail later on in chapter 4. In my case the LFS 
+explaind in full detail later on in chapter 4. In my case, the LFS 
 partition is mounted  on /mnt/lfs. If I read this book myself and I see 
 $LFS somewhere, I will pretend that I read /mnt/lfs. If I read that 
-I have to run this command: cp inittab $LFS/etc I actually will run this: 
-cp inittab /mnt/lfs/etc
+I have to run this command: cp inittab $LFS/etc, I actually will run this: 
+cp inittab /mnt/lfs/etc.
 </para>
 
@@ -22 +22 @@
 If you want, you can set the environment variable LFS. This way you can
 literally enter $LFS instead of replacing it by something like
-/mnt/lfs. This is accomplished by running: export LFS=/mnt/lfs
+/mnt/lfs. This is accomplished by running: export LFS=/mnt/lfs.
 </para>
 
@@ -35 +35 @@
 the variable and you use it in a command, $LFS will be ignored and whatever
 is left will be executed. The command cp inittab $LFS/etc without the $LFS
-variable set, will result in copying the inittab file to the /etc
-directory which will overwrite your system's inittab. A file like inittab 
+variable set will result in copying the inittab file to the /etc
+directory, which will overwrite your system's inittab. A file like inittab 
 isn't that big a problem as it can easily be restored, but if you would 
-make this mistake during the installation of the C Library, you can
+make this mistake during the installation of the C Library, you could
 damage things.
 </para>
 
 <para>
-One way to make sure that $LFS is set at all times you could add it to
-your /root/.bash_profile and/or /root/.bashrc file(s) so everytime you
-'su' to user too as to install LFS, the $LFS variable is set for you.
+One way to make sure that $LFS is set at all times is adding it to
+your /root/.bash_profile and/or /root/.bashrc file(s) so that every time you
+'su' to install LFS, the $LFS variable is set for you.
 </para>
 

chapter02/download.xml

@@ -22 +22 @@
 The next chapter contains the list of all the packages you need to download,
 but the partition that is going to contain our LFS system isn't created yet.
-Therefore store the files temporarily somewhere where you want and remember
+Therefore, store the files temporarily somewhere where you want and remember
 to copy them to $LFS/usr/src/ when you have finished the chapter in which 
 you prepare a new partition (chapter 4).