Changeset 296762cd for chapter01/changelog.xml

Timestamp:

05/12/2005 09:46:28 PM (19 years ago)

Author:

Matthew Burgess <matthew@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

e75916fc

Parents:

a86df62

Message:

Wording and tagging improvements

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@5318 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• chapter01/changelog.xml (modified) (8 diffs)

chapter01/changelog.xml

@@ -13 +13 @@
 mirrors via <ulink url="&lfs-root;"/>.</para>
 
-<para>Below is a list of changes made since the previous release of the book,
-first a summary, then a detailed log.</para>
+<para>Below is a list of changes made since the previous release of the book.
+First a summary, then a detailed log.</para>
 
 <itemizedlist>
@@ -85 +85 @@
 </listitem>
 
+<listitem><para>May 12th, 2005 [matt]: More wording and tagging improvements
+(thanks to Peter Ennis and Tony Morgan)</para></listitem>
+
 <listitem><para>May 12th, 2005 [matt]: Minor wording improvements (thanks to
 Peter Ennis)</para></listitem>
@@ -129 +132 @@
 <listitem><para>April 11, 2005 [manuel]: Several tags and text corrections.</para></listitem>
 
-<listitem><para>April 6, 2005 [jim]: Removed Iproute2 patch for a sed (Ryan Oliver).</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>April 6, 2005 [jim]: Removed IPRoute2 patch for a sed (Ryan Oliver).</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>April 6, 2005 [matt]: Move e2fsprogs sed command to
@@ -143 +146 @@
 </listitem>
 
-<listitem><para>April 4, 2005 [matt]: Fix E2fsprogs compile problem (Ken Moffat
+<listitem><para>April 4, 2005 [matt]: Fix e2fsprogs compile problem (Ken Moffat
 &amp; Greg Schafer)</para></listitem>
 
@@ -206 +209 @@
 </listitem>
 
-<listitem><para>March 14, 2005 [jim]: Added /var/log/hotplug for capturing
+<listitem><para>March 14, 2005 [jim]: Added <filename class="directory">/var/log/hotplug</filename> for capturing
 of hotplug events. Added /lib/firmware for firmware loading with hotplug</para></listitem>
 
@@ -252 +255 @@
 </para></listitem>
 
-<listitem><para>February 28, 2005 [matt]: Move /usr/bin/logger to /bin
-as the bootscripts need it there.  Fixes bug 1035.</para>
+<listitem><para>February 28, 2005 [matt]: Move <filename>/usr/bin/logger</filename>
+to <filename class="directory">/bin</filename> as the bootscripts need it there.  Fixes bug 1035.</para>
 </listitem>
 
@@ -288 +291 @@
 
 <listitem><para>February 19, 2005 [jeremy]: Added correction to chapter 5
-glibc build to correct the disabling of selinux functionality.  Thanks to
+glibc build to fix the disabling of selinux functionality.  Thanks to
 Bobson on IRC (bobson@bobson.net) for pointing this out.  Closes bugzilla
 1034.</para></listitem>
@@ -373 +376 @@
 from version 5.1.</para></listitem>
 
-<listitem><para>December 20, 2004 [manuel]: Made Grub's configuration location 
+<listitem><para>December 20, 2004 [manuel]: Made grub's configuration location 
 FHS compliant.</para></listitem>