Changeset 296762cd for chapter02/creatingfilesystem.xml

Timestamp:

05/12/2005 09:46:28 PM (19 years ago)

Author:

Matthew Burgess <matthew@…>

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Children:

e75916fc

Parents:

a86df62

Message:

Wording and tagging improvements

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@5318 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• chapter02/creatingfilesystem.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter02/creatingfilesystem.xml

@@ -10 +10 @@
 <para>Now that a blank partition has been set up, the file system can
 be created. The most widely-used system in the Linux world is the
-second extended file system (ext2), but with the newer high-capacity
-hard disks, the journaling file systems are becoming increasingly
-popular.  Here we will create an ext2 file system, but build
+second extended file system (ext2), but with newer high-capacity
+hard disks, journaling file systems are becoming increasingly
+popular.  We will create an ext2 file system, however build
 instructions for other file systems can be found at <ulink
 url="&blfs-root;view/svn/postlfs/filesystems.html"/>.</para>
@@ -51 +51 @@
 
 <para>If a swap partition was created, it will need to be initialized
-as a swap partition too (also known as formatting, as described above
-with <command>mke2fs</command>) by running the following. If you are using an existing
+as a swap partition by using the command below. If you are using an existing
 swap partition, there is no need to format it.</para>