Changeset 2c094d6 for chapter06/mountproc.xml

Timestamp:

09/28/2002 09:08:29 PM (22 years ago)

Author:

Timothy Bauscher <timothy@…>

Branches:

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Children:

4d46e012

Parents:

f5cc1c17

Message:

Applied Bill Maltby's grammar patch. Changed $LFS to LFS where appropriate. Internal XML cleanup: removed double spacing where appropriate.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2138 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• chapter06/mountproc.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter06/mountproc.xml

@@ -4 +4 @@
 
 <para>In order for certain programs to function properly, the proc file
-system must be available within the chroot'ed environment.
+system must be available within the chroot environment.
 As a file system can be mounted as many times and in as many places
 as you like, it's not a problem that the proc file system is already
@@ -22 +22 @@
 not enough memory</screen></blockquote>
 
-<para>Ignore these, they're just caused due to the fact that the system
+<para>Ignore these, they're just due to the fact that the system
 isn't installed completely yet and some files are missing. The mount itself
 will be successful and that's all we care about at this point.</para>