Changeset 37e35d2 for chapter09/clock.xml

Timestamp:

06/29/2020 07:55:01 AM (4 years ago)

Author:

Thomas Trepl <thomas@…>

Branches:

multilib-10.1

Children:

c4804e8

Parents:

d4fdde6

Message:

Update to new lfs structure

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/multilib@11986 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter09/clock.xml (moved) (moved from chapter07/clock.xml ) (3 diffs)

chapter09/clock.xml

@@ -17 +17 @@
   <para>This section discusses how to configure the
   <command>systemd-timedated</command> system service, which configures
-  system clock and timezone.</para>
+  the system clock and timezone.</para>
 
   <para>If you cannot remember whether or not the hardware clock is set to UTC,
@@ -31 +31 @@
 
   <para><command>systemd-timedated</command> reads <filename>/etc/adjtime</filename>,
-  and depending on the contents of the file, it sets the clock to either UTC or
+  and depending on the contents of the file, sets the clock to either UTC or
   local time.</para>
 
@@ -60 +60 @@
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>timedatectl set-time YYYY-MM-DD HH:MM:SS</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para>Hardware clock will also be updated accordingly.</para>
+  <para>The hardware clock will also be updated accordingly.</para>
 
   <para>To change your current time zone, issue:</para>