Changeset 3ae818d for prologue/foreword.xml

Timestamp:

04/16/2005 03:17:10 PM (19 years ago)

Author:

Matthew Burgess <matthew@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

5e4e104

Parents:

8710beb

Message:

• Minor wording/typo fixes

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@4973 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• prologue/foreword.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

prologue/foreword.xml

@@ -8 +8 @@
 <?dbhtml filename="foreword.html"?>
 
-<para>My adventures in Linux began six years ago when I downloaded and
+<para>My adventures in Linux began in 1998 when I downloaded and
 installed my first distribution. After working with it for awhile, I
 discovered issues I definitely would have liked to see improved upon.
@@ -38 +38 @@
 Linux community, it became apparent that there was sustained interest
 in the ideas set forth in my Linux adventures. Such custom-built LFS
-systems not only to meet user specifications and requirements, but
+systems serve not only to meet user specifications and requirements, but
 also serve as an ideal learning opportunity for programmers and system
 administrators to enhance their Linux skills. Out of this broadened