Changeset 51c7e26f for chapter01


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Timestamp:
10/09/2003 10:35:55 PM (21 years ago)
Author:
Alex Gronenwoud <alex@…>
Branches:
10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.1.1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, v5_0, v5_1, v5_1_1, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc
Children:
1a7aecc6
Parents:
c1e4223
Message:

Minor brush-ups, and splitting the basic-net section.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2956 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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chapter01
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  • chapter01/acknowledgements.xml

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    8181<listitem><para>Countless other people on the various LFS and BLFS
    82 mailinglists who are making this book happen by giving their suggestions,
     82mailing lists who are making this book happen by giving their suggestions,
    8383testing the book and submitting bug reports, instructions and their
    8484experiences with installing various packages.</para></listitem>
    … …  
    243243CDRW 8824E CD-writer.</para></listitem>
    244244
    245 <listitem><para>Countless other people on the various LFS mailinglists who are
    246 making this book happen by giving their suggestions, submitting bug reports,
     245<listitem><para>Countless other people on the various LFS mailing lists who are
     246making this book better by giving their suggestions, submitting bug reports,
    247247and throwing in their criticism.</para></listitem>
    248248

  • chapter01/changelog.xml

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    9797
     98<listitem><para>October 8th, 2003 [alex]: Chapter 8 - Making bootable: Adapted
     99the style of the screens, and reworded some paragraphs.</para></listitem>
     100 
     101<listitem><para>October 8th, 2003 [alex]: Removed a series of unused
     102entities.</para></listitem>
     103
    98104<listitem><para>October 7th, 2003 [jeremy]: Added notes to the linking tests
    99105in chapter 5 and 6 stating that blank output is a bad thing.</para></listitem>

  • chapter01/contactinfo.xml

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    77<title>FAQ</title>
    88
    9 <para>If you encounter any errors, have any questions, or if you find a
    10 typo in the book, then, please consult the FAQ (Frequently Asked Questions)
    11 page at <ulink url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/faq/"/>.</para>
     9<para>If during the building of your LFS system you encounter any errors, or
     10have any questions, or think you found a typo in the book, then please first
     11consult the FAQ (Frequently Asked Questions) at
     12<ulink url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/faq/"/>.</para>
    1213
    1314</sect2>
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    1416
    1517<sect2 id="ch01-irc">
    1618<title>IRC</title>
    1719
    18 <para>Members of the LFS community offer assistance on our community IRC
    19 server.  If you decide to utilize this mode of support, we ask that you
    20 at least ensure you've checked the LFS FAQ and the mailing list archives
    21 for the answer to your question.  You can find the IRC server at
    22 irc.linuxfromscratch.org port 6667.  The support channel is named
    23 #LFS-support.</para>
     20<para>Several members of the LFS community offer assistance on our community
     21IRC server. Before you utilize this mode of support, we ask that you've
     22at least checked the LFS FAQ and the mailing list archives for the answer to
     23your question.  You can find the IRC server at
     24<emphasis>irc.linuxfromscratch.org</emphasis> port 6667.  The support channel
     25is named #LFS-support.</para>
    2426
    2527</sect2>
    … …  
    3032
    3133<para>The <emphasis>linuxfromscratch.org</emphasis> server is hosting a number
    32 of mailinglists used for the development of the LFS project. These lists
     34of mailing lists used for the development of the LFS project. These lists
    3335include, among others, the main development and support lists.</para>
    3436

  • chapter01/versions.xml

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    33<?dbhtml filename="version.html" dir="chapter01"?>
    44
    5 <para>This is LFS-BOOK version &version; dated &releasedate;. If this
    6 version is older than a month a newer version is probably already available
    7 for download. Check one of the mirror sites below for updated
    8 versions.</para>
     5<para>This is version &version; of the Linux From Scratch book, dated
     6&releasedate;. If this book is more than two months old, a newer and better
     7version is probably already available. To find out, check one of the mirrors
     8listed on <ulink url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/"/>.</para>
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    1010</sect1>
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