Changeset 54948b7 for chapter08/libcap.xml

Timestamp:

11/21/2022 10:13:06 PM (17 months ago)

Author:

David Bryant <davidbryant@…>

Branches:

11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, bdubbs/gcc13, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

777f469, f01f8a5

Parents:

651f491

Message:

Straighten out capitalization, correct a few grammatical errors,
improve English idiom, clarify a few things, remove superfluous
verbiage, etc.

File:

• chapter08/libcap.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter08/libcap.xml

@@ -24 +24 @@
     <title/>
 
-    <para>The Libcap package implements the user-space interfaces to the POSIX
-    1003.1e capabilities available in Linux kernels. These capabilities are a
-    partitioning of the all powerful root privilege into a set of distinct
+    <para>The Libcap package implements the user-space interface to the POSIX
+    1003.1e capabilities available in Linux kernels. These capabilities
+    partition the all-powerful root privilege into a set of distinct
     privileges.</para>
 
@@ -117 +117 @@
         <term><command>getpcaps</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Displays the capabilities on the queried process(es)</para>
+          <para>Displays the capabilities of the queried process(es)</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-libcap getpcaps">
             <primary sortas="b-getpcaps">getpcaps</primary>