Changeset 5cd6caa for chapter08/grub.xml

Timestamp:

02/10/2004 10:06:21 PM (20 years ago)

Author:

Alex Gronenwoud <alex@…>

Branches:

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Children:

c91dd5b

Parents:

418e6cc

Message:

Another mix of minor text adjustments.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@3247 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• chapter08/grub.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

chapter08/grub.xml

@@ -4 +4 @@
 
 <para>Your shiny new LFS system is almost complete. One of the last things to
-do is ensure you can boot it. The instructions below apply only to computers
-of IA-32 architecture, i.e. mainstream PC's. Information on "boot loading" for
+do is ensure you can boot it. The instructions below apply only to computers of
+IA-32 architecture, meaning mainstream PCs. Information on "boot loading" for
 other architectures should be available in the usual resource specific
 locations for those architectures.</para>
@@ -40 +40 @@
 
 <para>Using the above information, determine the appropriate designator for
-your root partition. For the following example, we'll assume your root
-partition is <filename>hda4</filename>.</para>
+your root partition (or boot partition, if you use a separate one). For the
+following example, we'll assume your root (or separate boot) partition is
+<filename>hda4</filename>.</para>
 
 <para>First, tell Grub where to search for its <filename>stage{1,2}</filename>
@@ -119 +120 @@
 <para>If <command>info grub</command> doesn't tell you all you want to
 know, you can find more information regarding Grub on its website, located at:
-<ulink url="http://www.gnu.org/software/grub"/>.</para>
+<ulink url="http://www.gnu.org/software/grub/"/>.</para>
 
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