Changeset 663ecfc for chapter01


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Timestamp:
06/29/2005 04:24:16 PM (19 years ago)
Author:
Archaic <archaic@…>
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Message:

Several minor wording changes (chapters 1 - 5).

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@6232 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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  • chapter01/administrativa.xml

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    3030</sect2>
    3131
     32<para>The mailing lists hosted at <uri>linuxfromscratch.org</uri> are
     33also accessible via the Network News Transfer Protocol (NNTP) server.
     34All messages posted to a mailing list are copied to the corresponding
     35newsgroup, and vice versa.</para>
     36
     37<para>The news server is located at
     38<uri>news.linuxfromscratch.org</uri>.</para>
     39</sect2>
     40
    3241<sect2 id="ch-scatter-irc">
    3342<title>IRC</title>
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    4352<sect2 id="ch-scatter-newsserver">
    4453<title>News Server</title>
    45 
    46 <para>The mailing lists hosted at <uri>linuxfromscratch.org</uri> are
    47 also accessible via the Network News Transfer Protocol (NNTP) server.
    48 All messages posted to a mailing list are copied to the corresponding
    49 newsgroup, and vice versa.</para>
    50 
    51 <para>The news server is located at
    52 <uri>news.linuxfromscratch.org</uri>.</para>
    53 </sect2>
    5454
    5555<sect2 id="ch-scatter-wiki">

  • chapter01/askforhelp.xml

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    1616
    1717<para>We also have a wonderful LFS community that is willing to offer
    18 assistance through IRC and the mailing lists (see the <xref
     18assistance through the mailing lists and IRC (see the <xref
    1919linkend="ch-scatter-administrativa"/> section of this book). In order
    2020to assist with diagnosing and solving the problem, please include

  • chapter01/changelog.xml

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    1111
    1212<para>This is version &version; of the Linux From Scratch book, dated
    13 &releasedate;. If this book is more than two months old, a newer and better
    14 version is probably already available. To find out, please check one of the
    15 mirrors via <ulink url="&lfs-root;"/>.</para>
     13&releasedate;. If this book is more than four to six months old, a newer and
     14better version is probably already available. To find out, please check one of
     15the mirrors via <ulink url="&lfs-root;"/>.</para>
    1616
    1717<para>Below is a list of changes made since the previous release of the book.

  • chapter01/how.xml

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    3030patches need to be downloaded to build an LFS system and how to store
    3131them on the new file system. <xref linkend="chapter-final-preps"/>
    32 discusses the setup for an appropriate work environment. Please read
     32discusses the setup for an appropriate working environment. Please read
    3333<xref linkend="chapter-final-preps"/> carefully as it explains several
    3434important issues the developer should be aware of before beginning to
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    5555</para>
    5656
    57 <para>While this may initially seem like a lot of work to get away
    58 from a host distribution, a full technical explanation is provided at
    59 the beginning of <xref linkend="chapter-temporary-tools"/>.</para>
     57<para>While this may initially seem like a lot of work to isolate the new system
     58from the host distribution, a full technical explanation is provided at the
     59beginning of <xref linkend="chapter-temporary-tools"/>.</para>
    6060
    6161<para>In <xref linkend="chapter-building-system"/>, the full LFS system is
    62 built. The chroot (change root) program is used to enter a virtual
     62built. The <command>chroot</command> (change root) program is used to enter a virtual
    6363environment and start a new shell whose root directory will be set to
    6464the LFS partition. This is very similar to rebooting and instructing
    6565the kernel to mount the LFS partition as the root partition. The
    66 system does not actually reboot, but instead chroots because creating a
     66system does not actually reboot, but instead <command>chroot</command>'s because creating a
    6767bootable system requires additional work which is not necessary just
    6868yet. The major advantage is that <quote>chrooting</quote> allows the
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    8383step is discussed in the following chapters and package descriptions.
    8484Items that may seem complicated will be clarified, and everything will
    85 fall into place as the developer embarks on the LFS adventure.</para>
     85fall into place as the reader embarks on the LFS adventure.</para>
    8686
    8787</sect1>
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