Changeset 663ecfc for chapter01/how.xml

Timestamp:

06/29/2005 04:24:16 PM (19 years ago)

Author:

Archaic <archaic@…>

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Children:

ab1a271

Parents:

2ec0d20

Message:

Several minor wording changes (chapters 1 - 5).

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@6232 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• chapter01/how.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

chapter01/how.xml

@@ -30 +30 @@
 patches need to be downloaded to build an LFS system and how to store
 them on the new file system. <xref linkend="chapter-final-preps"/>
-discusses the setup for an appropriate work environment. Please read
+discusses the setup for an appropriate working environment. Please read
 <xref linkend="chapter-final-preps"/> carefully as it explains several
 important issues the developer should be aware of before beginning to
@@ -55 +55 @@
 </para>
 
-<para>While this may initially seem like a lot of work to get away
-from a host distribution, a full technical explanation is provided at
-the beginning of <xref linkend="chapter-temporary-tools"/>.</para>
+<para>While this may initially seem like a lot of work to isolate the new system
+from the host distribution, a full technical explanation is provided at the
+beginning of <xref linkend="chapter-temporary-tools"/>.</para>
 
 <para>In <xref linkend="chapter-building-system"/>, the full LFS system is
-built. The chroot (change root) program is used to enter a virtual
+built. The <command>chroot</command> (change root) program is used to enter a virtual
 environment and start a new shell whose root directory will be set to
 the LFS partition. This is very similar to rebooting and instructing
 the kernel to mount the LFS partition as the root partition. The
-system does not actually reboot, but instead chroots because creating a
+system does not actually reboot, but instead <command>chroot</command>'s because creating a
 bootable system requires additional work which is not necessary just
 yet. The major advantage is that <quote>chrooting</quote> allows the
@@ -83 +83 @@
 step is discussed in the following chapters and package descriptions.
 Items that may seem complicated will be clarified, and everything will
-fall into place as the developer embarks on the LFS adventure.</para>
+fall into place as the reader embarks on the LFS adventure.</para>
 
 </sect1>