Changeset 663ecfc for chapter03/introduction.xml

Timestamp:

06/29/2005 04:24:16 PM (19 years ago)

Author:

Archaic <archaic@…>

Branches:

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Children:

ab1a271

Parents:

2ec0d20

Message:

Several minor wording changes (chapters 1 - 5).

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@6232 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• chapter03/introduction.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter03/introduction.xml

@@ -8 +8 @@
 <?dbhtml filename="introduction.html"?>
 
-<para>This chapter includes a list of packages that need to be
-downloaded for building a basic Linux system. The listed version numbers
-correspond to versions of the software that are known to work, and
-this book is based on their use. We highly recommend not using newer
-versions because the build commands for one version may not work with
-a newer version. The newest package versions may also have problems
-that work-arounds have not been developed for yet.</para>
-
-<para>All the URLs, when possible, refer to the package's information
-page at <ulink url="http://www.freshmeat.net/"/>. The Freshmeat pages
-provide easy access to official download sites, as well as project
-websites, mailing lists, FAQ, changelogs, and more.</para>
+<para>This chapter includes a list of packages that need to be downloaded for
+building a basic Linux system. The listed version numbers correspond to versions
+of the software that are known to work, and this book is based on their use. We
+highly recommend not using newer versions because the build commands for one
+version may not work with a newer version. The newest package versions may also
+have problems that require work-arounds. These work-arounds will be developed
+and stabilized in the SVN version of the book.</para>
 
 <para>Download locations may not always be accessible. If a download
 location has changed since this book was published, Google (<ulink
-url="http://www.google.com"/>) provides a useful search engine for
+url="http://www.google.com/"/>) provides a useful search engine for
 most packages. If this search is unsuccessful, try one of the
 alternate means of downloading discussed at <ulink