Changeset 663ecfc for prologue/foreword.xml

Timestamp:

06/29/2005 04:24:16 PM (19 years ago)

Author:

Archaic <archaic@…>

Branches:

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Children:

ab1a271

Parents:

2ec0d20

Message:

Several minor wording changes (chapters 1 - 5).

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@6232 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• prologue/foreword.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

prologue/foreword.xml

@@ -12 +12 @@
 discovered issues I definitely would have liked to see improved upon.
 For example, I didn't like the arrangement of the bootscripts or the way
-programs were configured by default. I tried a number of alternate
+programs were configured by default. I tried a number of alternative
 distributions to address these issues, yet each had its pros and cons.
 Finally, I realized that if I wanted full satisfaction from my Linux
@@ -48 +48 @@
 the benefits of using this system. Users can dictate all aspects of
 their system, including directory layout, script setup, and security.
-The resulting system will be compiled straight from the source code,
+The resulting system will be compiled completely from the source code,
 and the user will be able to specify where, why, and how programs are
 installed. This book allows readers to fully customize Linux systems