Changeset 69993f4 for chapter01/how.xml

Timestamp:

08/29/2004 06:36:34 PM (20 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

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6.0

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8b320e7

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ec0a37e6

Message:

Second round of edits for final release

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/testing/BOOK@4066 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter01/how.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

chapter01/how.xml

@@ -20 +20 @@
 where the new LFS system will be compiled and installed. <xref
 linkend="chapter-getting-materials"/> explains which packages and
-patches need to be downloaded to build an LFS system, and how to store
+patches need to be downloaded to build an LFS system and how to store
 them on the new file system. <xref linkend="chapter-final-preps"/>
 discusses the setup for an appropriate work environment. Please read
@@ -32 +32 @@
 development suite (or toolchain) which is used to build the actual
 system in <xref linkend="chapter-building-system"/>. Some of these
-packages are needed to resolve circular dependencies -- for example,
+packages are needed to resolve circular dependencies&mdash;for example,
 to compile a compiler, you need a compiler.</para>
 
@@ -59 +59 @@
 the LFS partition. This is very similar to rebooting and instructing
 the kernel to mount the LFS partition as the root partition. The
-system doesn't actually reboot, but instead chroots because creating a
-bootable system requires additional work which isn't necessary just
+system does not actually reboot, but instead chroots because creating a
+bootable system requires additional work which is not necessary just
 yet. The major advantage is that <quote>chrooting</quote> allows the
 builder to continue using the host while LFS is being built. While