Changeset 69993f4 for chapter05/adjusting.xml

Timestamp:

08/29/2004 06:36:34 PM (20 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

Branches:

6.0

Children:

8b320e7

Parents:

ec0a37e6

Message:

Second round of edits for final release

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/testing/BOOK@4066 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter05/adjusting.xml (modified) (5 diffs)

chapter05/adjusting.xml

@@ -5 +5 @@
 ]>
 <sect1 id="ch-tools-adjusting">
-<title>Adjusting the toolchain</title>
+<title>Adjusting the Toolchain</title>
 <?dbhtml filename="adjusting.html"?>
 
@@ -32 +32 @@
 directories should be removed.</para>
 
-<para>The next task is to amend our GCC specs file so that it points
+<para>The next task is to amend the GCC specs file so that it points
 to the new dynamic linker. A simple sed script will accomplish this:</para>
 
-<!-- Ampersands are needed to allow cut and paste -->
+<!-- Ampersands are needed to allow copy and paste -->
 
 <screen><userinput>SPECFILE=`gcc --print-file specs` &amp;&amp;
@@ -43 +43 @@
 unset SPECFILE</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>It is recommended that the above command be cut-and-pasted in
-order to ensure correctness. Alternatively, the specs file can be
+<para>It is recommended that the above command be copy-and-pasted in
+order to ensure accuracy. Alternatively, the specs file can be
 edited by hand. This is done by replacing every occurrence of
 <quote>/lib/ld-linux.so.2</quote> with
-<quote>/tools/lib/ld-linux.so.2</quote>.</para>
+<quote>/tools/lib/ld-linux.so.2</quote></para>
 
 <para>Be sure to visually inspect the specs file in order to verify the
@@ -83 +83 @@
 <blockquote><screen><computeroutput>[Requesting program interpreter: /tools/lib/ld-linux.so.2]</computeroutput></screen></blockquote>
 
-<para>Note especially that <filename class="directory">/tools/lib</filename>
+<para>Note that <filename class="directory">/tools/lib</filename>
 appears as the prefix of the dynamic linker.</para>
 
@@ -100 +100 @@
 linkend="ch-tools-settingenviron"/> Another option is that something
 may have gone wrong with the specs file amendment above. In this case,
-redo the specs file amendment, being careful to cut-and-paste the
+redo the specs file amendment, being careful to copy-and-paste the
 commands.</para>