Changeset 69993f4 for chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml

Timestamp:

08/29/2004 06:36:34 PM (20 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

Branches:

6.0

Children:

8b320e7

Parents:

ec0a37e6

Message:

Second round of edits for final release

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/testing/BOOK@4066 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml (modified) (6 diffs)

chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml

@@ -57 +57 @@
 <listitem><para>The purpose of this switch is to remove <filename class="directory">/usr/local/include</filename>
 from <command>gcc</command>'s include search path. This is not absolutely
-essential, however, this helps to minimize the influence of the host
+essential, however, it helps to minimize the influence of the host
 system.</para></listitem>
 </varlistentry>
@@ -69 +69 @@
 <filename>libgcc_eh.a</filename> available ensures that the configure
 script for Glibc (the next package we compile) produces the proper
-results. Note that the GCC binaries will still be linked statically,
-as this is controlled by the <parameter>-static</parameter> value of
+results. Note that the GCC binaries will still be linked statically
+because this is controlled by the <parameter>-static</parameter> value of
 the <emphasis>BOOT_LDFLAGS</emphasis> variable in the next
 step.</para></listitem>
@@ -77 +77 @@
 <varlistentry>
 <term><parameter>--enable-languages=c</parameter></term>
-<listitem><para>This option
-ensures that only the C compiler is built. This option is only needed when you
-have downloaded and unpacked the full GCC tarball, as opposed to just
-having unpacked the gcc-core tarball.</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>This option ensures that only the C compiler is built.
+This option is only needed when you have downloaded and unpacked the
+full GCC tarball, as opposed to just the gcc-core
+tarball.</para></listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 </variablelist>
@@ -110 +110 @@
 normally be run, but, as mentioned before, the test suite framework is
 not in place yet. The benefits of running the tests at this point
-would be minimal since the programs from this first pass will soon be
+are minimal since the programs from this first pass will soon be
 replaced.</para>
 
@@ -121 +121 @@
 and therefore usable on all kinds of UNIX systems where the GNU C compiler
 is not always installed. Running <command>cc</command> leaves the system administrator
-free to decide what C compiler to install.</para>
+free to decide which C compiler to install.</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>ln -s gcc /tools/bin/cc</userinput></screen>
@@ -128 +128 @@
 
 <sect2 role="content"><title/>
-<para>The details on this package are found in <xref linkend="contents-gcc"/>.</para>
+<para>Details on this package are located in <xref linkend="contents-gcc"/>.</para>
 </sect2>