Changeset 69993f4 for chapter05/hostreqs.xml

Timestamp:

08/29/2004 06:36:34 PM (20 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

Branches:

6.0

Children:

8b320e7

Parents:

ec0a37e6

Message:

Second round of edits for final release

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/testing/BOOK@4066 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter05/hostreqs.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter05/hostreqs.xml

@@ -10 +10 @@
 <para>The host must be running at least a 2.6.2 kernel compiled with
 GCC-3.0 or higher. There are two main reasons for this high
-requirement. First, the Native Posix Threading Library (NPTL)
-testsuite will segfault if the host's kernel has not been compiled with
+requirement. First, the Native POSIX Threading Library (NPTL)
+test suite will segfault if the host's kernel has not been compiled with
 GCC-3.0 or a later version. Secondly, the 2.6.2 or later version of
 the kernel is required for the use of Udev. Udev creates devices
 dynamically by reading from the <systemitem
-class="filesystem">sysfs</systemitem> file system. However, only
-recently has support for this file system been implemented in most of
+class="filesystem">sysfs</systemitem> file system. However, support
+for this filesystem has only recently been implemented in most of
 the kernel drivers. We must be sure that all critical system devices
 get created properly.</para>
@@ -33 +33 @@
 be compiled.  The host system will then need to be rebooted to use the
 newly compiled kernel. Instructions for compiling the kernel and
-configuring the bootloader (assuming your host uses GRUB) are located
+configuring the bootloader (assuming the host uses GRUB) are located
 in <xref linkend="chapter-bootable"/>.</para>