Changeset 69993f4 for chapter05/perl.xml

Timestamp:

08/29/2004 06:36:34 PM (20 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

Branches:

6.0

Children:

8b320e7

Parents:

ec0a37e6

Message:

Second round of edits for final release

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/testing/BOOK@4066 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter05/perl.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

chapter05/perl.xml

@@ -33 +33 @@
 <screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../perl-&perl-version;-libc-1.patch</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Now prepare Perl for compilation (make sure you get the 'IO Fcntl POSIX'
-part of the command correct -- they are all letters):</para>
+<para>Now prepare Perl for compilation (make sure to get the 'IO Fcntl POSIX'
+part of the command correct&mdash;they are all letters):</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>./configure.gnu --prefix=/tools -Dstatic_ext='IO Fcntl POSIX'</userinput></screen>
@@ -56 +56 @@
 run it at this point. Only part of Perl was built and running
 <userinput>make test</userinput> now will cause the rest of Perl to be
-built as well which is unnecessary at this point. The test suite can
+built as well, which is unnecessary at this point. The test suite can
 be run in the next chapter if desired.</para>
 
@@ -68 +68 @@
 
 <sect2 role="content"><title/>
-<para>The details on this package are found in <xref linkend="contents-perl"/>.</para>
+<para>Details on this package are located in <xref linkend="contents-perl"/>.</para>
 </sect2>